Who Really Gives A Fuck You Bitch (407 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: -1.7 on 19 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by MEGACITO (View user info) at 2007-04-13 09:57:38 EDT
As the room went from bright and inviting to dark and looming my nerves suddenly took a turn for the worse. I had been here before and had definitely not been a stranger to the act that was unfolding before me , but for some reason tonight was different. I can't explain it , it just was. I went through the usual motions , approached the bed , I pulled my boxers down as to expose my already throbbing member for her close inspection. As usual she lay on her back , fully exposed to my every touch. She loved being stimulated while she was giving her oral report , it was something about the act that made her feel dirty but at the same time desired in a way that she was beginning to become comfortable with. Every moment seemed to last forever , every move , every touch seemed very deliberate. As the anticipation of the moment seemed to over take me she stopped..
I couldn't see anything because of the dark , the only light in the room was a faint red glow from the digital readout from the alarm clock and the nightstand. I called out to her but was only greeted by a heavy silence , so there I am naked as the day as I was born , ready and waiting to dive head first into my favorite place in the world when I heard the worst sound in my life.
" Sweetie all you paid for was a head job if you want any thing more it's going to cost you and extra hundred plus the room is only rented for thirty minutes "
That's about the time that my heart was broken.. I only had ten more dollars. Damn today's high priced whores...
User Reviews
Submitted by no1hasdis (user info) at 2007-04-13 15:14:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2007-04-13 15:08:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Nope.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-04-13 15:05:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by MEGACITO (user info) at 2007-04-12 12:57:42 PDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i'm the kicker of all ass , this post was a great first attempt, i can't believe i got such a shitty rating.
Submitted by NoMeD (user info) at 2007-04-13 15:02:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Yep, still a fag. DUDE, DO NOT post just for the sake of posting. Don't you know this is a serious writers forum?
*DISCLAIMER*
***The views of NoMeD and blah blah may or may not do some stuff involving other stuff to come to the conclusion that we're ankle biters.****
YOU SIR are an ankle biter.
Plus you look gay.
Big gay brown man.
HAHA.
Anyway, This review can strech on, stop -2ing people. You fucking SUCK, your posts suck. Your face sucks, literally.
I should stop drinking coffee.
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2007-04-13 14:56:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
aww it wasn't THAT bad.
It wasn't good but....
Submitted by Draco (user info) at 2007-04-13 14:41:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
i know, ... i was bored today and really didn't have it in me to post anything worth while
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Then don't post!
Submitted by GMCrayon (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:30:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I know I don't
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:23:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I see you only need 1 more....
Always willing to please...;-)
cheerio, sucker !
Submitted by snag (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:10:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by particle_man58 (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:03:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Go fuck your sister.
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:02:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
It's rape if you run out of money, kid. Here's hoping you end up in prison. They don't have money in prison, so it's always rape.
Submitted by MEGACITO (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:01:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
i know, ... i was bored today and really didn't have it in me to post anything worth while , hey at least it wasn't a gif or a camwhore or an r.i.p. piece of shit. so i'll say it myself .. fuk off and die..
Submitted by DudeThatsBOSH (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:01:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
yea have a poop mouth
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:01:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Up yours, biatch!
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:01:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Saw it from a mile away and I was planning on telling you just in case. Still waiting for the picture...until then expect a negative reception. I have powers to sway the general populace and you aren't taking advantage of them. Good luck.
Submitted by phuzzygish (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:01:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
i don't.
stop holding your farts in. they travel up your spine and come out as really shit ideas.
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:01:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Nice. I like the subtlties in your writing, and the sub plot left me wanting to know more about the characters.
Also the numerous metephors allowed the reader to really get involved.
Suck.
My.
Nuts.
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2007-04-13 10:00:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You are a fuck wit.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2007-04-13 09:59:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Allow me.