The Time Has Come.. 4 Unfucking Predictable Goodness !! (285 hits)
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Submitted by MEGACITO (View user info) at 2007-04-16 09:50:58 EDT
The time had come to stop it all. To make right what had been done to him but how ? With what little energy he had left he managed to drag himself up from the depths of his self hatred , his worthlessness but he still had alot of work to do. Alot of pain to cause and one life to end. His plan was simple enough , just wait until he comes back down into the cellar and give him what you have been planning this whole time , make him see that you can't hurt a person the way he had been for all these years without reparation , with out having to see first hand the pain that he had caused.
The moment grew ever closer and so did the second guessing , being a victim meant that all control had been relinquished , in this case to his captor. But the revenge in which he had been living for the past few days made him feel alive , made him feel a purpose for taking his next breath. Not like when he was the victim and the mere thought of being alive for one more second was more than enough to kill him. No this feeling was one of anticipation and wonder. One second his mind was reeling at the fact that payback was finally within his reach, the next his thoughts were consumed with anxiety and guilt over what he was planning to do , but he wouldn't let that stop him.
For months the torture had been a regular part of his routine , he would descend into the abyss in the hidden cesspool at the rear of his very large property only to be greeted by the smells and sights of victims long forgotten. Like the ten year old boy that had asked him to buy him a pack of smokes outside the corner grocery only to be greeted by a cold and calculated stare that resulted in that ten year olds mandible bone being a display , a trophy if you will on the wall of a killer. Or the rings that his latest victim had been wearing when she was taken from outside of the nightclub in which she worked. He often wondered would these people be missed or if their family or friends , if they had any , were beside them selves with grief or doubled over in pain. He never truly cared , it was more of a passing thought , nothing he ever did had any real affect on him because inside he was already dead. The first couple of killings were a rush and made him feel alive but the more and more blood that he spilled the more and more it became ritual to him and had lost it's desire and hold on him. Now he hurt and caused pain because that is the only thing that he truly lived for , the only thing that he wanted to do with his free time.
Today would be no different , or so he thought. He already had the plan laid out in his head , he would begin just as he had with all the other victims , a few kind words to the captured , to make them feel a glimmer of hope that they would see the sunlight and live their lives again. A scrap or two of food to build a small bit of energy so that the torture wouldn't kill his victims right away. And a chance for the victim to plead with him , as they always did for their lives. It never worked , he had never let a victim go and never let a victim escape and he didn't plan on starting now. Although he was a little leery about the fact that he had abducted a grown man considering that the majority of his victims were women and small children , but this particular victim was smaller in stature than him and had seemed to pose little to no threat.
As he approached he could tell that something seemed different be he didn't know what , he couldn't see anything out of place and he didn't think that anything was out of place but there was just something about the air that felt different. AND THEN HE SAW IT ....DEFIANCE, the will to live and survive had presented itself in the form of his victims blood written on the wall.. it was only a few simple words crudely written on the stone walls inside the small cage where he kept all his pets but they held the weight of a thousand pounds. This is what he saw YOU WILL NEVER TAKE MY LIFE , I WON'T LET YOU.
He was furious , in the haste to get the door to the cage open he had left his bucket of tools laying right outside the cage door. He knew that there was no way his latest victim had been able to cut himself , he had no clothing and nothing within reach to make the incision , but then he saw it. A small piece or rock had been chipped away from the wall with the shackles and had been grinded down to make one sharp edge , this was the tool his victim had used to take his life. As he stood over what used to be a man with a family and two small children he looked with disgust at the body he now had to dispose of , the body that he wouldn't be able to cause pain to , the body that he had needed to make him feel that electricity on which he thrived.
He turned his back to get his tools to unlock the shackles and that is when it happened... he bent down to grab the key and farted.. not any fart but a fart that would peel the paint off the walls , a fart that would rival a long night of drinking topped off with a stop at the W.C.Lounge 9 white castles ).. a fart that made him so sick that he felt like throwing up the pound of flesh that he had eaten less than an hour ago , it was a stink so evil and vile that even the strongest of fragrances wouldn't be able to mask.
The moral of this story is , if your a sick fuck who kills people, hangs out on UBER and rapes children, god will punish you by giving you the worst case of gas that you will ever experience..
NOW THAT'S FUCKIN BOSH BITCHES !!!!
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Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-04-17 13:02:51 EDT (#)
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Submitted by phuzzygish (user info) at 2007-04-16 10:36:01 EDT (#)
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hey are you a mexican i hear they can run real fast?
Submitted by phuzzygish (user info) at 2007-04-16 10:30:05 EDT (#)
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They giv me one piss toast.
I want to pisses.
I say i want to piss, on my plate.
They kick me out.
I spit on them.
ghaptooey.
DID YOU COME HERE TO DIE????????/
NAO!!! I COME HERE YESTERDAI!!!
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2007-04-16 10:17:56 EDT (#)
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Y HELO THAR GIANT TEXT BLOCK.
Submitted by Draco (user info) at 2007-04-16 10:10:11 EDT (#)
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I gave up trying to read this a third of the way into it.
The "enter" key is your friend. Use him.
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-04-16 10:06:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Um...wow.
Good news: You're getting better.
Bad news: This still sucks. You're obviously intelligent enough to write something worth reading, unfortunately your writing style is waaaaaaay too heavy handed to be taken seriously. Also, your content is always overwhelmingly negative. Frankly, I've got enough evil shite cluttering up my head; I don't need juvenile bull-pucky gumming up the gears in my head. Try writing something nice for once. You might suprise yourself with how good it makes you feel.
Otherwise, this is a freakin' train wreck...
Submitted by snag (user info) at 2007-04-16 10:05:13 EDT (#)
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Everything you ever wanted to know about MEGACITO
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you're right dude. You kick all KINDS of ass.
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-04-16 10:04:55 EDT (#)
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botd 2
Big block of bull: -1
Bosh-abusing : -1
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Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2007-04-16 10:03:09 EDT (#)
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Naga read it, too hard on the eyes.
If you don't care about the reader, the reader won't care about what you've written.
Submitted by MEGACITO (user info) at 2007-04-16 10:02:57 EDT (#)
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yeah i did it so what , my posts kick all kinds of hot , noobie , wanna be uber god , glue sniffing , diet coke drinking , kick you in your sack just to see your face , mother raping , black and proud but still using the nigga word to piss of stupid media types , ass !!!! so run and tell your mom , i'm knockin , i think you hear me comin , i'm bringin a few friends , thier all pissed and hopped up on coke and meth , and the party is about to begin bitches !!!!
Submitted by snag (user info) at 2007-04-16 09:59:20 EDT (#)
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Holy block of 3rd grade-level text, batman!
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2007-04-16 09:53:12 EDT (#)
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Blimey