Narcissus (438 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 1.16 on 11 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by ripple (View user info) at 2007-04-26 10:59:35 EDT
Narcissus
- I'm lucky to know you - -a silent reply-
-O, God, but to feast upon your
beauty each day- (cue silence)
-Oh how content I am-
(and they were)
day after day
-My love, how gaunt you are - I am (?) - I am (.)
You shall dine on my lips
(withdraws . . .
sweet water)
day after day after-
-Darling, what sharp extremity
curls 'round your throat?
What figure
lurks behind your
resplendent form?
No harm shall befall you
I lunge forward to protect you-
Bony fingers close.
User Reviews
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-05-22 18:21:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
wow. yer grumpy.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-04-26 17:17:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by BeaverDamn (user info) at 2007-04-26 08:13:50 PDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2007-04-26 11:00:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
-2DIE
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YOU SHOW HIM... or ... yourself... WHO'S BOSS
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-04-26 13:57:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-04-26 13:57:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-04-26 11:29:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
pretty cool...
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-04-26 11:25:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-04-26 11:21:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2007-04-26 11:19:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
i liked it.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-04-26 11:18:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
liked it
Submitted by BeaverDamn (user info) at 2007-04-26 11:13:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2007-04-26 11:00:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
-2DIE
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YOU SHOW HIM... or ... yourself... WHO'S BOSS
Submitted by ripple (user info) at 2007-04-26 11:00:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
-2DIE