SUPA R4: Arsonist’s Prayer (420 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 1.73 on 18 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by ahumblefool (View user info) at 2007-04-27 13:26:04 EDT
I will be gone beginning of next week, so here it is.
Arsonist's Prayer
Your beauty, it entices me
The simplicity of your love
You are always so willing
A simple touch and you dance
I feel your heat, it sears me
My gentle breathe makes you tremble
In delight and yearning for another
I perspire in preparation for what you give
I desire your cleansing, it refreshes me
Your seductive curves always changing
No woman delights me with such charms
I ache with want for your magnificence
I demand your obedience, it excites me
You shine and I am hypnotized again
A flicker of time and we are together
I feel your desire and I fuel your need
I insist on your attention, it empowers me
Temptress I am weak in your presence
Moving from shadow to light haunting me
I am a slave to your seductive dance
Twisting
Turning
Bending
Revolving
Twirling
Curling
I require your love, it claims me
You take from me and grow stronger
Beauty intensified and out of control
I lose myself in your passion
Burn
User Reviews
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-05-02 23:13:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I like each of yours for different reasons, and cannot choose one over the other.
As such, sample my indecision.
Submitted by messmind (user info) at 2007-05-02 12:05:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Echo's inside my head...
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-05-02 11:47:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I hope I face you in the finals.
http://www.ubersite.com/m/101244
Submitted by Mr_Burns (user info) at 2007-05-02 11:30:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This is by far the best of all 4 entries.
Submitted by ColchesterDr (user info) at 2007-05-01 23:32:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Good
Submitted by ColchesterDr (user info) at 2007-05-01 23:22:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by ahumblefool (user info) at 2007-05-01 22:46:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-05-01 22:06:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Your poetry tends to remind me of songs I love, apparently.
Rolling and unrolling
Coiling emerging
Running free
Running through the underworld int your room
Tori Amos - "Lust"
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So you give my competition a 2 and me a 1! How dare you after all I have done for you, our date is off! :)
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-05-01 22:06:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Your poetry tends to remind me of songs I love, apparently.
Rolling and unrolling
Coiling emerging
Running free
Running through the underworld int your room
Tori Amos - "Lust"
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-04-30 09:19:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
What gofer said. Nice job, AHF.
Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2007-04-29 17:13:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You've been consistent so far, so I'm going to leave you with this +2 until I see your competitor's piece, and then will work down from there as necessary, or not at all.
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-04-29 15:26:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
liked the line breaks
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2007-04-27 22:13:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Boogie 'til ya puke...
Submitted by steph (user info) at 2007-04-27 21:32:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Thoroughly enjoyed it. The reviews cracked me up too.
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-04-27 15:21:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
1.5
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-04-27 15:21:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Nice dance.
Submitted by shitfuck (user info) at 2007-04-27 15:06:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Arsonist's Prayer
Holy shit. Did you see it?
The way that fucking church
Blew up?
Whoosh.
I'm glad I'm not a hard gay.
But I did have sex with my hand
When you were prostrate
And calling out hymns.
It landed in your hair.
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-04-27 13:43:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-04-27 13:28:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I think an arsonist got ahold of my weiner, cause it BURRRRRRNS when I pee.