Lost Sheep - Finale (503 hits)
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Submitted by ticklish_squirrel (View user info) at 2007-05-14 14:00:04 EDT
For Shlongy
Jenna climbed up on to Adam's lap, straddling him; her tan, firm thighs griping his hips. She leaned back and slowly began unbuttoning her blouse. One by one the buttons popped open exposing her voluptuous breasts. They were very full for someone her age, but still extremely perky and pink.
She shed her white blouse and it floated silently to the floor. She leaned forward, placing her hands on each side of the Reverend's head. He leaned forward and kissed the curve of each breast.
Unable to take it any longer, he ripped down the edge of her cup, taking her hard pink nipple between his teeth. He rolled in tenderly back and forth before sucking the whole thing into his mouth.
Jenna threw her head back and moaned loud. She placed her hands on either side of his jaws and held him close to her chest. "I want to feel you, Adam. I need to. Please." she begged.
He slid his hands down to her hips and picked her up so she knelt above him. Jenna took his hand and led it up her skirt to her panties. He quickly slipped his fingers inside to find her more than ready for him. Her lips were swollen and slick, ready for a man to take her. He was that man.
Adam gently pulled the white lace aside and slid one hand up to her hip; the other traveled up to her rosy breast and massaged it. He slowly pulled her down onto him. She gasped as he entered her, his girth being far more than she had ever handled.
He felt her tight, wet lips squeeze around him; that was almost too much to bear. He had never felt a woman so swollen and ready before, not even his own wife.
Adam settled her down onto him, and instinctively she began to rock back and forth, lifting herself up slightly as she drew away each time, and coming back with more and more force.
He rolled his hips, still in disbelief of how tight her little pussy was. It was wrong, oh God, this whole situation was so wrong, but she felt so fucking good, it was all he could do not to explode in her right there!
He thrusted harder and harder. Jenna moaned, he was so big and it hurt her a little, but there was another feeling, one she knew was the feeling she had been looking to experience.
She lifted up and plunged back down onto him quickly, the intensity building in her clit. She was nearing her climax and was about to plummet over the edge into her own unknown and Adam knew it.
He wrapped his arms around her waist and pounded himself into her. Jenna moaned loud and sharp, grabbing the back of his neck, digging her nails into his flesh. Her breath came heavily now, a moan lining each one. Adam felt it to. He grew even harder, if it were possible. Her pussy tightened around him as she screamed his name, she found what she was looking for.
Adam tried not to, but it was too late. He was coming inside of her. Her own body milking it out of him. Every last drop.
Slowly and intensely, they rocked back and forth, descending from the heights of carnal instinct.
She collapsed forward onto his chest, sighing deeply, her hair cascading down.
Adam closed his eyes and drew a deep breath.
"I knew it would smell like flowers." he thought.
User Reviews
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-06-27 18:30:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'll always +2 a little bit of erotica.
Submitted by Grownasskid (user info) at 2007-05-16 10:04:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
should have gone with my ending. nothing is sexier than skinning your lover and making a coat out of her, post coitus.
still, good stuff. i applaud your courage to write something overtly sexual. Not sure I'd have the stones for it.
Submitted by ticklish_squirrel (user info) at 2007-05-15 11:11:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
"I grimaced at "voluptuous breasts" because it's so cliche."
I know, I know, I know! Aggh, what the heck! Sometimes you just gotta kick your own ass and ask yourself "What the hell were you thinking?!"
Submitted by creep_firebombing (user info) at 2007-05-15 07:28:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This was pretty good, but not as good as the first two. I grimaced at "voluptuous breasts" because it's so cliche.
Overall, nicely done.
Submitted by czwij (user info) at 2007-05-15 04:07:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-05-14 21:07:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
read this at work, not the best idea.
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then don't read it out loud
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-05-14 21:07:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
read this at work, not the best idea.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-05-14 16:09:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Well, if it's for Shlongy, it's probably great.
Submitted by The_Drake (user info) at 2007-05-14 16:04:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I got half a boner reading this.
Submitted by ticklish_squirrel (user info) at 2007-05-14 15:12:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Sorry, you're totally right, it was predictable. Sometimes I'll be on a roll! Then, all of the sudden, I lose all inspiration. Weird.
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-05-14 14:43:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Very sweet, but a little conventional.
I don't know, maybe it's just me but I could have used a bit more of a build-up.
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Not bad at all, though.