"Velvet On The Inside" - (NSFW Audio) (1077 hits)
Category: Sound & MusicLabels: Book
Rating: 1.69 on 24 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by kaos-king (antius777) (View user info) at 2007-05-18 11:58:04 EDT
This is one of the shorter tales that made it into my book.
It takes me a lot not to giggle when reading it aloud.
The other day, I read it out for some friends; the two girls almost threw up.
Um, I wouldn't let your boss hear this if I were you...
Velvet On The Inside.mp3 (3 MB) [audio/mpeg]
User Reviews
Submitted by FALLEN (user info) at 2007-05-21 11:04:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Dude, you are fucked up in ways I can't find the words for.
Submitted by sexualchocolate1984 (user info) at 2007-05-21 07:29:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Can't listen as no speakers at work and better things to do at home.
But I know and love this story! +2 all the way!
Submitted by mockidol (user info) at 2007-05-20 01:43:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm bored and you kick ass.
Umm, random fact and +2 time.
The famous statue "The Thinker" is intended to be Dante.
I assume you know that so the fact is for others.
Enjoy doing what you do.
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-05-19 15:33:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Barnymeinhoff (user info) at 2007-05-19 14:25:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-05-19 06:53:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
haha erection
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2007-05-19 06:53:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
you have a ben stein delivery style.
Submitted by Susie_Derkins (user info) at 2007-05-18 19:27:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Oddly enough, you sound much like I expected.
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2007-05-18 15:22:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
*the macabre, not *to macabre. That sounds dirty, really sexually depraved dirty, hehe.
Good to know, it is difficult to convey inflection in a few lines of type.
It does seem like the begining to a very gruesome tale indeed. I tend to shy away from the "missing little girl found dead, raped, decapitated, defacated on, dismembered, turned inside out, stuffed in her parent's freezer" type of story, but I like the fact that you eluded to that sort of scenario without painting a picture for us. I think a lot of the modern horror section lacks subtlety, writers tend to focus on the brutality to shock the reader rather than building a compelling and frightening story.
I've enjoyed your writing for a while, glad to see you're doing something with it unlike so many other talents that shelve themselves for fear of financial insecurity/criticism/ect.
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2007-05-18 14:36:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Shadow - - I think I found amusement in a 'job well done.' I wished to create a tale that would effect people somehow, regardless of the emotions it brought. Knowing that my story made two individuals so uncomfortable that they actually felt ill, well... I feel that I've accomplished my mission.
Submitted by zwerg (user info) at 2007-05-18 13:58:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I like hearing things read with the emphasis and mood the writer intended.
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-05-18 13:29:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Dude, you sound like the crippled guy in 'Hannibal'...which is freakin' Perfect.
like the others said, it's good to put a voice to the face
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2007-05-18 13:13:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
upon the listening (once I had the headphones plugged in) I can see why someone with a weaker stomache might get upset. It's really not that bad though, I've seen worse.
Good luck with the book.
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-05-18 13:11:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:05:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm listening right now. I have no idea what I thought your voice would sound like, but I'm surprised by it somehow.
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2007-05-18 13:06:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
ok, there's no question you've got a spark of creativity. There's no denying you've got inspiration, but you giggled at something that would make others throw up?
Don't get me wrong, I've been known to pull out to macabre from time to time. I enjoy pieces that rip the veil off of our laquered and polished world and show the depravity that is hidden by the illusion. But it's not for the sadism, I don't enjoy the wicked vile things, I just need to know they are there, acknowledge them and give them their due. I believe that's a healthy approach.
It makes me wonder (seriously, not jabbing at you) do you find suffering in reality amusing? Could you giggle when presented with real blood, real tear stained faces whimpering under the weight of pain?
Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:55:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
and, and, and, and,
someone edit me.
Submitted by Despina (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:45:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
lol u sound like a fat nicholas cage lol
Submitted by AshK (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:29:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I thought it was interesting to hear this read. I think it would be good to have a voice on it with some twang. I don't know why.
I'd love to hear it as more of a performance, but it was very "textbook", if that makes sense. I know that there is a lot of and drugs between that incident and this interview, but you/he should sound a little nauseated by the whole thing. If you were going for performance.
I'll shut up now.
It is nice to put a voice with the face.
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:26:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
your voice trips me out.
hardcore.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:25:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Is this about a pussy?
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:20:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by mockidol (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:18:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You have a funny voice.
Submitted by mockidol (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:18:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You have a funny voice.
Submitted by Caulaincourt (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:11:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
i can hear your double chin press on your larynx.
my brother and i used to laugh at fat american tourists who sounded like that.
we'd call them turkeys.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-05-18 12:05:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm listening right now. I have no idea what I thought your voice would sound like, but I'm surprised by it somehow. It's a perfect compliment to your writing.
I'm in PA, and some of your accent matches mine.