Non-reality (413 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.7 on 14 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Kraven (View user info) at 2007-05-22 11:20:06 EDT
I've posted a few poems, some the uberers' loved- others well, you know what happends when you suck. I havn't posted in a very long time, and i in no way want your mercy! Enjoy- if you like it you like it, but if you dont i'm glad i could waste your time today.
This is a poem i wrote a while back-
A pad a pen, and a comfy spot,
I sat here bored, and then i thought,
You know theres' such this lovely girl,
To me shes' worth the whole wide world.
A minute went by, and then i said,
I'll just write down, whats in my head,
I wrote some things, they all were right,
But the more i thought, i got uptight.
So i sat some more, to devise a plan,
I squared my shoulders, 'i'm a man,'
I'll call her up, and speak my mind,
But, that useually gets me in a bind.
A pen a pad, and a comfy spot,
I sat here bored, and then i thought,
This lovely girl, she isnt right,
She sure knows how to put up a fight.
A minute went by, and then i said,
I've got to get this out of my head,
I'll draw a picture, to show her how,
i'm emotionally attached, to her now.
So i sat there with my pen in hand,
A beautiful image of a far away land,
We could dance all night, hand in hand,
And count all the stars, with our toes in the sand.
A pad a pen, and a comfy spot,
I sat here in love, my heart had been caught,
A smile on my face, i knew what to do,
So I sat down and wrote a poem for you.
And in the poem, i spoke my heart,
How life without you, would tear me apart,
And everynight, i dream of you,
Were we would ran away, to live on the moon.
I rhymed about, what all i had,
The things that used to make me glad,
And how nothing compares, to how i feel,
When i know that you are standing near.
A pad a pen, and a comfy spot,
Thinking of you, and cherishing each thought,
And the joy i feel, when holding you tight,
When you give those hugs, saying goodnight.
And when i was done, thats when i knew,
I'd give anything, just to be with you,
To make you laugh, trying to be sappy,
And to see you smile, knowing your happy.
And then soon after, i fell asleep,
Like a baby i slept, without making a peep,
And there in my dream, we sat on the moon,
Together forever, just lost in the mood.
User Reviews
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-05-22 18:07:44 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Kraven (user info) at 2007-05-22 15:13:07 EDT (#)
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I like rhyming poetry- Different strokes for different folks i guess.
People like music- but not rhyming poetry...
I guess its the fact of having music behind it that changes it, who knows.
Submitted by Nugk (user info) at 2007-05-22 14:21:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Why do people write poetry that rhymes... It sucks. Fuck.
Submitted by zwerg (user info) at 2007-05-22 13:10:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
wow
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-05-22 12:54:37 EDT (#)
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i think that I shall never see
a poem as well hung as Shlongy...
...FUCK
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-05-22 12:39:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Was this a poem?
Submitted by Flapjacksupreme (user info) at 2007-05-22 12:02:01 EDT (#)
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Nope.
Submitted by FALLEN (user info) at 2007-05-22 11:36:40 EDT (#)
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No negative because I can't do poems but I went from hearing
one fish
two fish
red fish
blue fish
to fighting back the urge to yell THREE VW'S FOR UNDER 17 GRAND, WHOOO!!!!
Submitted by Void_Where_Prohibited (user info) at 2007-05-22 11:27:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
For the effort.
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2007-05-22 11:24:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
what he said.
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-05-22 11:24:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
So nur nur, nur nur nur.
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-05-22 11:24:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Hell, even I'VE wrote better poems.
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-05-22 11:24:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
I'm not being funny, but it was bad.
Shlongy writes better poems.
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-05-22 11:23:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
This was bad.