Hail Mary (321 hits)
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Submitted by Vicousness63 (View user info) at 2007-06-07 05:46:49 EDT
She rolled lazily from her stomach to her back, noting with wicked pleasure that the ribbon on her wrists were now restricting circulation so much that her hands were growing numb. Trails of blood ran messily down her stomach from smarting fresh cuts; the older ones glinted a beautiful garnet and she admired the thick come-like consistency of coagulated blood. A dark, heavy beat pounded away in a nearby room. She tuned it out and shook her left wrist a little, feeling the restraint pull uncomfortably as it fell taut against the anchoring point: her bedpost. She then refocused her attention on the scene before her.
He was perusing her bookshelf, his plain white t-shirt glowing eerily in the violet light. After a few moments, his face became animated and he pulled from her shelf a thick, leather-bound book. Tossing it on the bed, he said, "Now it's time for the real fun to begin."
She smiled back appreciatively. "You mean there's more?"
"Nat!" he admonished playfully. "There's always more. Now, turn back over."
She did as she was told, shivering as he climbed on top of her. He traced old scars on her back with a gentle hand, willing them away with his calloused fingertips. The book he was holding in his other hand fell open on her back. Somehow, she knew what he'd plucked from the shelf.
"Hail Mary, full of grace, the Lord is with thee..." he said tauntingly. "You know that prayer, don't you?"
"No," she lied, embarassed.
"Yes you do. Recite it for me."
"But--" she hesitated. He bent down aggressively, putting his lips to her ear, brushing her lobe softly.
"Slut. Sinner. Heretic. Do what I tell you to do." He resumed his former position, and as if to put emphasis on his command, sliced her lower back with a razor already covered in drying blood. It was a small gesture, not particularly painful, but she got the message.
Her voice wavered as she began, "Hail Mary, full of grace, the Lord is with thee..."
He parted her legs forcefully, and leaning down, rested his face between them. She gasped, but continued.
"Blessed art thou amongst women, and blessed is the fruit of thy womb, Jesus..."
He continued moving his head, his tongue, his hands. The drawing of her blood in juxtaposition with the intense pleasure arising from his mouth left her nearly speechless. She writhed sinuously, her stomach and hips rotating rhythmically.
"Holy Mary, mother of God..."
He was whimpering slightly, and this noise gripped her. She closed her legs forcefully and flung herself from her stomach to her back. Her hands were still bound, but she clamped her legs tightly around his waist as he rose from his crouched position. Blood trickled vermillion from the corner of his mouth; he had bitten his lip and she had caused it.
"Pray for us sinners, now and at the hour of our death..."
"Amen," he finished for her. His lips were upturned in a fiendish grin. He smacked her roughly, but she had braced herself for this.
"Keep going," she challenged. He repeated his gesture but she shook her head mockingly. Forcing himself inside her, he grabbed her by the roots of her hair and began slamming her head repeatedly into the headboard.
"Is that what you want?" he grunted, his arm tiring from the repeated action.
"Yes, yes..." she moaned as the blood flowed freely from her scalp.
Red drops like tinted rain pelted the bible as they rocked back and forth together on the cheap motel bed. The music in the other room grew louder, and the black light on the wall flickered and finally blew. She opened her eyes, and though she could see no face, imagined that she was fucking Jesus.
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Submitted by PukingDog (user info) at 2007-06-07 22:03:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Interesting... therapy may help, it may not... probably too late... nicely written.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-06-07 21:30:44 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Zebra (user info) at 2007-06-07 21:15:42 EDT (#)
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There's a Brazilian film from the 60's called I'll Take Your Soul at Midnight (I think) that you might enjoy.
Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2007-06-07 21:13:57 EDT (#)
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Submitted by viciousness63 (user info) at 2007-06-07 20:49:02 EDT (#)
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HA!
I know. There's a lot more where that came from.
Submitted by SilentRenegade (user info) at 2007-06-07 14:26:51 EDT (#)
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you need a therapist...
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-06-07 08:12:44 EDT (#)
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Submitted by viciousness63 (user info) at 2007-06-07 07:52:00 EDT (#)
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It didn't quite occur to me, Phuzzygish.
Submitted by phuzzygish (user info) at 2007-06-07 07:51:37 EDT (#)
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Shoulda emailed me the pic, and kept this on the front page lass...
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-06-07 07:07:00 EDT (#)
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My, my, my...
Not bad.
Keep it up, please.
Submitted by The_Hitcher (user info) at 2007-06-07 06:10:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Almost as evil sounding as me!
Submitted by viciousness63 (user info) at 2007-06-07 06:04:38 EDT (#)
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Not rape, heavy bondage. By forcing himself inside her I don't necessarily mean without consent, just without warning her. It was a sudden action.
Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-06-07 05:58:37 EDT (#)
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There really isn't any point in smashing her head into the headboard of the bed is there? I mean she's tied up. He's apparently raping her by "Forcing himself inside her". He has a razor and is slicing her to conform with some sort of ritual... Focus more on the spiritual sense of the piece and not the violence.
Unless this wasn't fiction. And then it's creepy.
Submitted by a_little_more_time (user info) at 2007-06-07 05:58:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Read some of your othe stuff.
Never mind. Looks like you just had an off-morning. You're very good.
Submitted by viciousness63 (user info) at 2007-06-07 05:54:03 EDT (#)
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You win some, you lose some.
This really isn't something I'd usually put much effort into, I just felt kind of... um... kinky tonight.
Submitted by a_little_more_time (user info) at 2007-06-07 05:49:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
*shrug* 'S okay. Been reading a lot of posts like this lately.
This wasn't the best one.