Trickle (402 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 1.33 on 12 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Tactile Ire (View user info) at 2007-07-05 04:20:41 EDT
A small trickle, cavorting down the way.
I watch the blood as the trickle slows, and dries and explodes into crimson ruby lush.
The wan light of winter, seeping through the window becomes the warmth of the source, reaching for me, its lost son, with unfathomable love.
I look to the angel at me shoulder. Her works fall from her hand, the rubber tube slips from her teeth and for a brief second she grins that free and feral grin that's been tattooed on my brain for nearly a year.
She arches back into the couch, and begins to convulse. The spittle sprays from her open mouth in diamond arcs of splendor. Her seizure beats the heartrhythm of the universe, her heels drumming on the hardwood floor a counterpoint that speaks of truth and endings.
I float into exquisite lightness, and her choking glotterals guide me on.
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I come to in grey haze of washed out soul.
I'm propped against something cold, like marble, like Hannibal Lecter leaning his face against David.
I sit up, head thumping and the worldsick.
She's on the couch beside me. Cold. A fly crawls across her exposed eyeball, but what grabs my attention is the dried drool marking her chin, showing where a small trickle cavorted down the way.
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Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-07-17 02:41:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
"ubervores".
nice coinage.
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-07-05 17:33:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-07-05 12:09:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Snare (user info) at 2007-07-05 04:58:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks, Rob.
What are you doing awake, man?
Isn't it the wee small hours over there?
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It was indeed - I closed up shop right after that review.
Submitted by lover101 (user info) at 2007-07-05 11:27:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No Comment
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2007-07-05 10:21:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
eh
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-07-05 09:52:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2007-07-05 09:37:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2007-07-05 06:09:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Brings back memories of going down on a woman during her menstruel period. There is little funnier than staring at a post orgasm flushed woman, with menstruel fluid all over your chin licking your lips and croaking "reddddrummmm, redddrummm!" and then doing that motorboat noise thing on her belly.
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i'm off red meat for at least a week now :(
(although the redrum thing is sickly entertaining)
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2007-07-05 07:38:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2007-07-05 06:09:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Brings back memories of going down on a woman during her menstruel period. There is little funnier than staring at a post orgasm flushed woman, with menstruel fluid all over your chin licking your lips and croaking "reddddrummmm, redddrummm!" and then doing that motorboat noise thing on her belly.
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And here's me having tomato soup for breakfast. Thanks large, Mack.
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2007-07-05 06:09:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Brings back memories of going down on a woman during her menstruel period. There is little funnier than staring at a post orgasm flushed woman, with menstruel fluid all over your chin licking your lips and croaking "reddddrummmm, redddrummm!" and then doing that motorboat noise thing on her belly.
Submitted by CarterPFly (user info) at 2007-07-05 05:46:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Beautiful
Submitted by Snare (user info) at 2007-07-05 04:58:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks, Rob.
What are you doing awake, man?
Isn't it the wee small hours over there?
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-07-05 04:25:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Dark.
"I come to in the grey haze of washed out soul."
What a wicked line.
(I just know you MEANT to put the 'the' in there. Right?)
Good to see you around, dude.