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Submitted by <guitarjunky421.at.yahoo.com> (View user info) at 2007-07-07 14:35:07 EDT
She was the nicest elderly woman that someone could ever meet. Polite to a fault and tidy enough for a hospitle, which was well considering she used to be a career nurse, or the wonderful home she has kept for nearly fifty years now. So then why? Years that have been shared with her beloved and loyal husband. Who has never stopped loving her no matter how many times she has given him the rough side of her tounge over their quarrels small and large. Why? Sharp as tack and quick with her witt, any who think age has dulled her mind will have that changed quickly and without argument. God why?
Many children has she reared, and they children of there own. And never once has the love for any of them diminished with growth of the number. But then why? Her feelings were reciprocated to her many times fold, for she was their rock and matriarch. Morol stability had been her charge since she was a girl, having to raise her little brother and sister from mewling babes had certainly seen to that. Why now?
No one could have predicted why or even offer a prediction as to why. The moment was so abrupt and stark the shock never really hit. It was a normal day she was just returning from her saturday errands, it was about one in the afternoon time for a nap. No one in the house questioned the fact that she locked her bedroom door before laying down. Three hours had gone by since then and worry crept thoughout the house. I knocked politely asking if she was alright and got no answer. Realizing the door was locked I pressed my ear to the door and listened intently for any sound of her. The only sound was a small gurgaling noise fear suddenly filled my being. I yelled this time and through a heavy shoulder at the door several times, the comotion I made roused the rest of the houses occupants. The door finally gave way and I was met with an image that erased all thought and caught my breath in my throat.
Her once loving face was dark violet almost black, clear blue eyes were now filled with blood, and her swollen tounge lolled to the side of her parted blue lips. Slowly in small circles she swung form the motion of her bodies last spasm. There was no note to be found, nothing to explain; Why? Nothing for consolment, but why should there be.
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Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2007-07-09 00:24:08 EDT (#)
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nah brah, tha dog can't back you on this on brah...
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-07-08 18:41:47 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-07-08 16:58:32 EDT (#)
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-07-08 16:58:24 EDT (#)
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Submitted by ICO (user info) at 2007-07-08 12:54:37 EDT (#)
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Sorry, completely unreadable.
Submitted by matchstickman (user info) at 2007-07-08 10:51:00 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2007-07-07 15:32:06 EDT (#)
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Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2007-07-07 15:29:56 EDT (#)
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Um...
This post was a prime example of a decent piece in desperate need of good editing.
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2007-07-08 00:38:36 EDT (#)
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Everything you ever wanted to know about jpk34359
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Like you're any authority on quality posts? Your overall is probably the same on BOTH of your accounts.
Submitted by Foolproof (user info) at 2007-07-07 19:42:34 EDT (#)
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Submitted by jpk34359 (user info) at 2007-07-07 17:40:43 EDT (#)
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You also suck, sir. Please, eat a bag of shit. Then go die.
Carry on
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I'm just negating this fuckwit.
Whoever he is, his rating does not give him the right to say anything here sucks.
Submitted by jpk34359 (user info) at 2007-07-07 17:40:43 EDT (#)
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You also suck, sir. Please, eat a bag of shit. Then go die.
Carry on
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2007-07-07 15:32:06 EDT (#)
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Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2007-07-07 15:29:56 EDT (#)
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Um...
This post was a prime example of a decent piece in desperate need of good editing.
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2007-07-07 15:29:56 EDT (#)
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Um...
This post was a prime example of a decent piece in desperate need of good editing.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-07-07 15:22:42 EDT (#)
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this had about 300 more spelling and grammatical errors than i normally allow if i am to award a post a positive rating
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-07-07 15:06:47 EDT (#)
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Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2007-07-07 14:56:38 EDT (#)
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I like to do a little swinging from the noose every now and again, myself. Helps keep me focused.
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how very harold and maude of you
Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2007-07-07 14:56:38 EDT (#)
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I like to do a little swinging from the noose every now and again, myself. Helps keep me focused.
Submitted by darkwulffe (user info) at 2007-07-07 14:42:38 EDT (#)
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horribly spelled, but not bad
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-07-07 14:39:38 EDT (#)
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Fuck this.