Mirror and Reflection (entry #1) (292 hits)
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Submitted by Epistolary Contest Entry (View user info) at 2007-07-09 02:16:46 EDT
Dear Reflection,
I miss you terribly. Splitting from you was the worst mistake I have ever made. I'm sorry I called you shallow and two-dimensional. I didn't mean it. I long for your gaze once more. I long for your dark and smouldering eyes burning me with their passion. How I miss even the most casual of glances, the most frivolous catching of your beauty as you pass.
I am nothing without you. My world is both empty and meaningless.
I am merely glass on a wall.
I thought that distance would make it easier to say goodbye.
As the saying goes, it has only made my cold hard warm with fondness for you.
This warmth I do not feel, alone in a mansion on a hill in Transylvania.
What was I thinking? Come back to me.
Forever longing,
Mirror
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Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-07-10 19:28:25 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Siren (user info) at 2007-07-10 15:24:04 EDT (#)
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I like this one. It was very clever.
Submitted by blueboy (user info) at 2007-07-09 15:28:08 EDT (#)
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Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2007-07-09 08:55:32 EDT (#)
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Hard = Heart on that line I fucked up. Obligatory +2.
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Submitted by DrogoRoch (user info) at 2007-07-09 04:52:46 EDT (#)
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Wow mirrors and vampires nice.