Below everthing & On everything. (443 hits)
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Submitted by ih8u2man (View user info) at 2007-07-09 20:14:49 EDT
"Where are we going?" I ask her.
She tells me "South.
To Bolivia"
I think that it will be too hot.
Sticky hot.
You know.
so you try and make things more agreeable
but you're constantly sweating like a sickness.
And you want things to be feasible,
But you're constantly drowning in your likeness.
Smoke why don't you?
I have something to share with you.
Cannot say too much about it.
They have tight raps out there (on the outside of my head).
A beautiful dynamic really.
Consisting of bugs and shadows.
Below everything & On everything.
Lurking and eating the floor out from under me.
I end up falling into their nest.
They end up tearing me apart,
Into tiny dime sized pieces.
And feeding me to the one they call "The Queen".
It's either that or cancer I think.
There's so many good questions to ask in life.
There's so many angles.
Here.
This way.
This way.
This way.
This way.
This way.
This way.
Concrete?
Well, it's semantics.
All of it.
I'm probably near the end. So I'll let you sort it all out.
User Reviews
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2007-07-10 11:48:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-07-10 09:33:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-07-10 01:32:33 EDT (#)
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for you below...
http://www.ubersite.com/m/100558
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that was the whole point of my review........
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-07-10 02:37:21 EDT (#)
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Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-07-10 01:32:33 EDT (#)
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for you below...
http://www.ubersite.com/m/100558
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-07-09 23:38:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
stop with the fucking poetry and post pictures of your mum.
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-07-09 22:22:56 EDT (#)
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Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2007-07-09 22:13:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I have decided to read your works like oddly spaced prose. They are prosepoems, really. I like them this way.
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YES YES YES.
Exactly my good man. Exactly.
Submitted by Stagger_Lee (user info) at 2007-07-09 22:16:34 EDT (#)
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Submitted by goferforhire (user info) at 2007-07-09 22:13:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I have decided to read your works like oddly spaced prose. They are prosepoems, really. I like them this way.
Submitted by Fatterrific (user info) at 2007-07-09 21:49:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
no.
Submitted by zoobie2000 (user info) at 2007-07-09 21:19:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
don't understand it but deserves a 2 doesn't it?
Submitted by forthewin (user info) at 2007-07-09 20:41:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
let's dance in style, let's dance for a while
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-07-09 20:23:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
The filename is awesome isn't it?
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-07-09 20:18:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by darko (user info) at 2007-07-09 20:17:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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