MYTHOLOGY of memory (625 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: 1.38 on 13 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by puck (View user info) at 2007-07-23 20:44:47 EDT
Apollo is a stalker now, he's a-huntin' me on down
it won't be long until his bow puts me on the ground.
won't you wrap me like Achilles, up in your Love so strong?
with your Heart as my shield nobody's gonna do me wrong.
is that your lipstick smiling at me from the filters in the tray?
i collect them as souvenirs sos that I never miss a day;
while some men collect postage stamps and others just make lists
i'm filling up a jar to keep your each and every kiss.
now fly with me like Dizzy G. and listen to the notes,
while the hornman's goin' crazy you can kick off your shoes and coat
and let the rhythm be your feet as we float into embrace
and while we waltz like Lovers we fall upwards into space.
Did Hades have your bank notes back, or are you still goin' broke?
Did Zeus raise up your interest rates and leave you to spit and choke?
ain't shit you gonna do 'bout it, 'cause the Gods don't make no law,
all you can rely on now is all that you ever saw.
we thinkin' we need power but all that I need is Love,
promise me you'll be with me until below becomes above.
i don't need nobody, baby, 'cause you already sank into my soul
so your body can be without me, but i still got ya till we're old.
Forget-Me-Nots are blooming, like them flowers in my brain,
roses dried and upside down, beside Lavender just the same.
Lean in to let the candelabra spit flame upon your lips
and though the band keeps playin' on the final set we'll miss
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Submitted by Dervish (user info) at 2007-07-24 22:39:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I just went out and bought The Monster Squad on DVD today.
I'd never seen it before.
It was AWESOME. Have a +2 for that.
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-07-24 17:51:42 EDT (#)
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-07-24 15:35:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2007-07-24 14:33:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Your beats are off again, so the rhymes don't flow or work well together.
Sometimes you hit a line just right and sometimes the words fall over themelves before they reach a punctuation mark.
Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2007-07-24 13:04:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
rule
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2007-07-24 09:31:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-07-24 09:14:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
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Submitted by SunnyG (user info) at 2007-07-24 08:41:27 EDT (#)
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Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-07-24 08:31:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2007-07-24 03:20:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 Apollo/Puck kiss kiss lick lick
rowl
meowwww
ewwwwwww
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2007-07-24 00:14:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This was devoid of thought, talent, or ability, and yet I liked it.
Submitted by Crystle (user info) at 2007-07-23 23:48:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
pretty good.
just needed a random mention of method
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-07-23 20:53:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 puck