Drunk and Rambling, Soon To Speak (601 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: 1.25 on 12 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by puck (View user info) at 2007-07-30 22:30:53 EDT
her name it rhymed with everclear, her voice was cold as frost
and while i wandered through the brush my spirit became lost,
i kissed my soul asunder and let myself fall down into the pit
and while i lay there like a leper i saw all that i missed.
it was that wicked man who came up to my door that night
and brought me a message in a bottle that was made out of ice.
we bled like roses in the garden and fucked under the sun
like Judas' tribe we've been lost for years lookin' for anyone.
can't give up the ring just yet 'cause the wedding's soon at hand,
when there will come a shrilling trill from horn man in the band
signaling to the bride that it's time for her last unwed steps
and we could lose our lifetimes here and give away our bets.
it's not the birds up in the trees who sing such lovely songs
or the crickets hiding in the grass playin' fiddles all night long,
the words of weeping wonder spoke make a lovely glass of wine
while under moonlight at midnight i strive to make you mine.
i offered you my body and instead you chose my heart;
with empty tuned harmonicas the bluesmen cannot bark.
i kissed the Christ upon the cross and Jehovah sold me dope
Buddha ate all my baked goods and Ganesha stole my rope.
i could buy a brand new car and race it way up to the hills
and chase the lute God''s Chariot just to get me some thrills.
so though i know that i'm alive i know that Death comes soon
to take me to my after Fate and leave my body rotten in the room.
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-08-01 20:41:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-08-01 10:21:18 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2007-08-01 05:07:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2007-07-30 22:33:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This would make a bitchin Ronnie James Dio song.
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Why does everybody use his full name?
Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2007-07-31 12:33:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
nice
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-07-31 11:33:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
BLOCK'O'TEXT
Submitted by SunnyG (user info) at 2007-07-31 09:24:47 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-07-30 22:36:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This was cool. I wish I could write poetry sometimes.
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You call this poetry?
Submitted by BranDo (user info) at 2007-07-31 07:13:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Great stuff.
Loved it.
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2007-07-31 04:33:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
nice
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-07-31 01:30:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 puck
Submitted by Antioxident (user info) at 2007-07-31 00:09:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-07-30 22:36:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This was cool. I wish I could write poetry sometimes.
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2007-07-30 22:33:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This would make a bitchin Ronnie James Dio song.