Breaking Windows On My Street (755 hits)
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Submitted by ih8u2man (View user info) at 2007-08-05 03:03:42 EDT
Formidable.
A passing grade at best.
Totally hopeful.
Laughing at the obvious.
Casual as always.
Passive as if flawless.
A new entendre.
A new escape.
I sense your weakness, sarcastic at best.
How is it that hapiness exists in memories?
That hope, though weakness excepts pleasure.
Don't listen to me.
I'm a drunk.
A casualty.
Like accidental overdose.
Like chemical bliss.
Happiness is a fleeting moment.
That's that.
Hopeless.
Through emptiness. Through captivity.
Temptation.
Sanctity.
Purpose.
Live.
Taste.
Hope.
Cure.
Hate.
Remorse.
Shallow fortitude.
I'm ashamed that you read this far.
That you amused your anquish this way.
I assume that you called.
That you wished.
That I feel for you.
I push for you.
I admit my fault.
Faults.
Get the world by the tail.
Hold it.
Within the projections.
The reporting system.
Claps.
Applause.
I want to express my nickel.
Push my cents.
Take a dollar, to the edge.
I encourage all servitudes.
Throw it around why don't you?
Coo coo ca chu.
Miggy pa pa too.
I can't see anything.
I feel amused.
Complicated.
Writing the words that the street man sings.
Alone, conscience of attitudes.
If anything changes.
You let me know.
I love you.
I'm gonna take you.
Back home.
Again.
Sorry.
I'm drunk.
I didn't mean it.
I think I made my point.
Just heard smashing glass.
Sorry about all this.
But I needed to share it.
I needed to bleed it out.
On us.
On them.
On the consequences that shave away at the push and the pull and the take aways.
That I need you.
Is enough.
Don't take this as truth.
This is expense.
This is following you.
Tracking you.
Sorry.
I'm confused.
I hear them begging.
Screaming.
But I am not here.
I am no where.
I AM YOU.
YOU.
YOU.
YOU.
YOU.
YOU.
User Reviews
Submitted by Circe (user info) at 2007-08-07 05:40:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
"I'm ashamed that you read this far. "
Me too.
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-08-06 09:07:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2007-08-06 05:31:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I actually was reading this until you started with the one word lines.
Submitted by BubbaEarl (user info) at 2007-08-05 22:30:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by BubbaEarl (user info) at 2007-08-05 22:30:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
icjkead
Submitted by freebie (user info) at 2007-08-05 20:28:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Uuuuuhh, right....
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2007-08-05 14:13:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Meh.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-05 13:15:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-08-05 10:35:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by St_Jimmy (user info) at 2007-08-05 10:19:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by particle_man58 (user info) at 2007-08-05 03:59:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I am the Walrus.
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Shut the fuck up Donny. You're out of your element.
Submitted by ameelius (user info) at 2007-08-05 07:01:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-08-05 05:45:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Not quite as good as your last one.
I think there's a lot of truth hiding here though. Something silent, something damaging.
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Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-05 04:00:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I am the eggman!
Submitted by particle_man58 (user info) at 2007-08-05 03:59:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I am the Walrus.