I Just.... (993 hits)
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Submitted by ih8u2man (View user info) at 2007-08-10 17:47:01 EDT
I just want to wake up next to you my love.
I want to push the hair off your forehead as you're sleeping.
Watch as your eyes move under your eyelids - as you dream the way you do,
and wonder where your beautiful mind has taken you.
I just want to clean up your place, it's not a mess...but it needs me.
I just want to make you coffee in the morning.
Take the dishes out of the sink from the dinner we ate last night.
Rinse out the wine glasses.
I just want to pick up the hanging plant that fell months ago,
the one on your porch that you haven't had the energy to put back up.
I just want to sneak up on you while your reading.
Reach down and pull your hair aside, and kiss your neck.
Tell you that I love you.
Tell you how happy I am.
I just want to look up as I am writing and see you there sleeping in your chair.
The print edition of the New York Times sliding off your lap and about to hit the floor.
I want to watch your toes curl up while we listen to Elliot Smith,
and John Frusciante and the Beatles.
I just want to hold you when you are about to go to work,
and tell you to forget about all the stupid people.
It doesn't matter what they say.
I just want to read you something I just wrote.
Or show you the song I came up with,
while I watched you through the crack in the washroom door as you took a shower.
And the steam billowed out in soft rolling clouds and made the reflections
in the mirror blurred and grey.
I just want to kiss your lips,
and hold your hips and tell you we're ok.
I just want to take away the pain you think you have.
And replace it with your dreams.
I just want to go to the beach with you.
Falling asleep on a blanket, softly discussing the ways of the world.
Finding new truths, exploring hapiness.
I just want to make you happy.
I just want to hold your hand when we walk and be proud of you.
I just want to feel your little fingers in my hand.
I just want to hear your voice,
speaking to me in French from the tapes that you've been studying.
For the trip that we could take.
And the love that we could make would last a thousand lifetimes.
And never disappear.
I just want...
I just...
want to love you.
User Reviews
Submitted by ruthless (user info) at 2008-05-15 23:25:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I just want to kiss your lips,
and hold your hips and tell you we're ok.
*sigh*
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-25 13:55:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
ykwiwts
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2007-08-13 08:17:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
i liked it well enough, actually a +1 on a piece of poetry is kinda a lot from me.
Submitted by YELLOW-MAN (user info) at 2007-08-13 01:44:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Fuck YES! I just might win it.
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Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-12 14:18:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-08-11 15:05:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Can I commission you to write a love poem to beer for me?
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You bet. I'll start as soon as I get one of those beautiful beverages in my hand.
For you?
no charge.
Submitted by RabiedRooster (user info) at 2007-08-12 13:09:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I just want to throw up
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-08-12 07:38:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Fatterrific (user info) at 2007-08-12 06:44:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
*makes finger-down-throat gagging motion*
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2007-08-12 01:10:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
My love for you is like a truck, Berserker
Would you like some making fuck, Berserker
My love for you is like a rock, Berserker
The Berserker is just so obscene
Likes evil people you know what I mean
He takes your soul and then just rips you apart
He'll steal your heart
Would you like to smoke some pot, Berserker
My love for you is ticking clock, Berserker
Would you like to suck my cock, Berserker
Would you like some making fuck, Berserker
Submitted by BranDo (user info) at 2007-08-11 19:01:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
me too.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 18:27:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2007-08-11 15:14:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This makes me sad, a little
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-08-11 15:05:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Can I commission you to write a love poem to beer for me?
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-08-11 13:41:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-08-11 13:40:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by LegoSockPuppet (user info) at 2007-08-11 10:23:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Gotta be a bitch on this one. I'm not a fan of "poetry" that really would do better in paragraph form. Taking sentences
and breaking them
up into nice little
lines
does not poetry
make.
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-08-11 09:04:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2007-08-11 03:16:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I like
Submitted by haikumikoo (user info) at 2007-08-10 20:47:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I bet you can get some head out of this poem, if you play your cards right.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-08-10 19:49:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA below
Submitted by AllyJeans (user info) at 2007-08-10 19:48:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I just want to throw up;
your sonnets written so sweetly.
curdled saccharine sugar drops falling
like hail on paper. o release,
free me from this gagging
gasping groping horse penis;
my throat stretched like goat--
see what you do to me!
Fuck me with the lights on!
for once! I need to know
you are a man.
Submitted by YELLOW-MAN (user info) at 2007-08-10 18:45:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-08-10 18:35:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Reading this post make me quite ghey.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-08-10 18:05:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
just want to clean up your place, it's not a mess...but it needs me.
I just want to make you coffee in the morning.
Take the dishes out of the sink from the dinner we ate last night.
Rinse out the wine glasses.
I just want to pick up the hanging plant that fell months ago,
the one on your porch that you haven't had the energy to put back up.
===
It IS a mess.
But thanks for being so nice about it.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-10 18:02:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
this kills me
Submitted by DudeThatsBOSH (user info) at 2007-08-10 18:00:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
http://break.com/index/four-hands-guitar.html
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-08-10 17:56:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
dig it.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-10 17:54:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I know. You're good at it too. I'm just being a dick. It's kinda what I do too.
:-)
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-10 17:52:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Sorry man.
It's kind of what I do though.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-10 17:48:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
http://www.ubersite.com/m/110784