a la droite (1303 hits)
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Submitted by experima (View user info) at 2007-08-10 22:41:21 EDT
i tilt my head
to the right.
i see everything.
everything so clearly.
it comes
sometimes altogether
sometimes in a flash
a small sight
taste
touch.
everything i said
true.
everything i say
true.
you, too.
things i have done
things i have done
only want to experience them with you.
first time, first time.
things i have pretended.
only honest with you.
twinsoul
livesoul
onesoul.
ask nothing from you;
impulse says "give me."
no.
i give you.
give everything to you;
impulse says "do not."
no.
i am your fount.
things you said, things i said
today.
"that is all."
remember?
i want to give you
get you.
all of you.
and let myself receive.
to allow myself only
just once only
to receive.
you be the one.
always the one, forever
how have you been, old friend?
mon vieil ami, mon coeur, mon amour.
nice to see you again.
after so many lifetimes.
***
joy is such a rare thing.
:to enjoy
to enjoy tears in my eyes
is the rarest of things.
congratulations
i'm yours.
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Submitted by iambetteratit (user info) at 2008-06-25 15:21:22 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-04-03 16:37:34 EDT (#)
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okay this one i just couldn't sorry doll
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-11-09 19:30:38 EST (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by jojo747 (user info) at 2007-09-03 15:46:47 EDT (#)
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really bad
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-09-03 15:05:26 EDT (#)
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twinsoul
livesoul
onesoul.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-08-17 12:13:02 EDT (#)
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Tilt your head down onto my shaft.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-17 12:01:09 EDT (#)
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you FINISHED it? all? in one day? wow!
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Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2007-08-17 00:50:11 EDT (#)
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Invasion series completely FINISHED
Now I can go back to being a hermit and trying to finish my schoolwork ;(
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-16 21:43:16 EDT (#)
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I'm so glad, Ax. That's great. Thanks for continuing that series, and for giving me advance notice :)
Thanks for the 2 YM.
Submitted by YELLOW-MAN (user info) at 2007-08-16 20:29:36 EDT (#)
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I wondered why the hell that word was stuck in my head (a la droite) now I know...
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2007-08-16 20:07:04 EDT (#)
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The Story of My Invasion will have a new installment tomorrow. I've done 6 so far, I'm planning on doing 9 or 10.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-13 23:33:56 EDT (#)
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just for fun i ran the whole thing through a dodgy french translator. any better? :)
tee hee
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j'incline ma tête vers la droite.
je vois tout. tout tellement clair.
elle vient
parfois tout à fait parfois dans un flash un petit contact de
goût de vue.
tout I dit rectifient. tout je dis vrai.
vous, aussi.
les choses i ont fait des choses que j'ai faites veux seulement les
éprouver avec vous. première fois, première fois.
les choses i ont feint. seulement honnête avec vous. onesoul de
livesoul de twinsoul.
ne demandez rien de vous ; l'impulsion indique que "donnez-moi." non.
je vous donne.
donnez-tout vous ; l'impulsion indique que "pas." non. je suis votre
source.
choses que vous avez dites, choses i dit aujourd'hui. "qui est tout."
rappelez-vous ?
je veux vous donner vous obtiens. tout le vous.
et laissez-vous reçoivent.
pour se permettre de recevoir seulement juste une fois seulement. vous
soyez celui.
toujours celui, comment avez-vous été pour toujours, vieil ami ? ami
de vieil de mon, coeur de mon, amour de mon. gentil de
vous revoir.
après tant de vies.
***
la joie est une chose si rare.
to apprécient
apprécier des larmes dans mes yeux est le plus rare des
choses.
des félicitations je suis à vous.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-13 22:17:49 EDT (#)
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it just means "today."
as caul can tell by his grammar correction, i speak very little french and what i do remember is not that great :)
gnarls said she'd teach me once......but instead gives me a -2 for even trying a little :(
*cries*
Submitted by haikumikoo (user info) at 2007-08-13 20:50:09 EDT (#)
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Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 18:45:20 EDT (#)
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aujourd'hui.
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I don't know what that means, I don't feel like asking the internet, so the +2 is there assuming that you will explain it.
I've never taken any French, at all...ever
Submitted by Design (user info) at 2007-08-13 18:43:13 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-08-13 18:18:46 EDT (#)
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YOKOOOOOOOOOOOOO
Submitted by Caulaincourt (user info) at 2007-08-13 15:14:14 EDT (#)
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considering the context, the title shoulda been "à droite" or "à ma droite"
p.s. i'm just nitpicking cuz for once it's not my gramar that sux :-D
Submitted by YELLOW-MAN (user info) at 2007-08-13 01:43:34 EDT (#)
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Fuck YES! I just might win it.
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Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-12 14:17:17 EDT (#)
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...indeed
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-12 14:17:00 EDT (#)
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this was really good.
just wanted to throw that in there.
Submitted by SunnyG (user info) at 2007-08-12 12:14:41 EDT (#)
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I just threw up in my mouth a little.
Submitted by DudeThatsBOSH (user info) at 2007-08-12 09:36:40 EDT (#)
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im hungover and rating everything i read this morning. unfortunately i don't enjoy poetry, so im not sure whether this is good or not.
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-08-12 04:51:00 EDT (#)
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My favorite solo Lennon is #9 Dream.
Submitted by GnarlsBarkley (user info) at 2007-08-12 04:30:46 EDT (#)
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well cause... title was in french, but there's no more than that
GHEY BAR.
Submitted by DCWoody (user info) at 2007-08-11 18:59:51 EDT (#)
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Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 18:45:20 EDT (#)
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aujourd'hui.
Submitted by haikumikoo (user info) at 2007-08-11 17:29:07 EDT (#)
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Also, fuck Sufjan, I hope he dies alone.
Submitted by haikumikoo (user info) at 2007-08-11 17:26:55 EDT (#)
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It's funny that you attached a picture of John and Yoko, because while reading I couldn't decide if this sounded like a really bad Paul McCartney song (on par with Silly Little Love Songs...even though I think that was Wings), or one of his songs that I hate sober, but really like when I'm under the influence of...well, anything really (such as Hello, Goodbye...yes I know, Beatles and all that jazz).
I think I like his solo album Ram, John makes fun of the cover (Paul holding the horns of a ram I believe) in an album slip picture where he holds the ears of a pig.
What a jerk.
As far as John Lennon goes, "Love" is my favorite song from his solo stuff. I think that's the name anyways...Love is ____ etc...
Oh, and I fucking hate the song Imagine, mostly because of the douchebag indie kids that talk about how great John's solo stuff is, when that's the only song they've heard.
Bastards.
Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2007-08-11 14:55:51 EDT (#)
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I didn't actually read it though :(
Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2007-08-11 14:54:14 EDT (#)
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Your poetry is a Sufjan Stevens song.
(Not really, but it reads like it.)
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 14:04:12 EDT (#)
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so in love with you
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-08-11 13:37:26 EDT (#)
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-08-11 13:37:14 EDT (#)
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Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:48:46 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-08-11 08:38:59 PDT (#)
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Just so you know... It's your turn.
But I'm going to bed. It's 1:30am and I've run out of beer and I'm tired. I spent three hours cleaning my bbq today. It was a greasy bitch. Now it's all shiny and clean. So you have some time before you continue to decimate me.... zzzzzz....
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what time zone are you on???????????
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:42:02 EDT (#)
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I didn't realize that train ever even passed through.
hi ho, hi ho, off to work i go.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:41:28 EDT (#)
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justin timberlake is HOT
Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:38:59 EDT (#)
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Just so you know... It's your turn.
But I'm going to bed. It's 1:30am and I've run out of beer and I'm tired. I spent three hours cleaning my bbq today. It was a greasy bitch. Now it's all shiny and clean. So you have some time before you continue to decimate me.... zzzzzz....
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:34:27 EDT (#)
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uQc3SzD1XjA&eurl=
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:31:57 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-11 08:26:35 PDT (#)
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Cock flock: (lat. cockus flockus) verb. The amazing phenonmenon that occures when an attractive woman posts something (anything) on the intrawebs. Millions and millions of pre-pubescent boys, deranged serial killers, 47 year old married men and desperate, desperate, desperatly lonely bachelors converge upon the post and begin fwapping in the hopes of gettin a morsel of conversation from said attractive woman.
This is a modern day occurance. In the past, cock flocks took place at county barn dances.
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+2 country barn dances
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:31:12 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-08-11 08:24:46 PDT (#)
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HELP! I'M BEING HASSLED BY A CHICK!
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this made me LOL
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:26:35 EDT (#)
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Cock flock: (lat. cockus flockus) verb. The amazing phenonmenon that occures when an attractive woman posts something (anything) on the intrawebs. Millions and millions of pre-pubescent boys, deranged serial killers, 47 year old married men and desperate, desperate, desperatly lonely bachelors converge upon the post and begin fwapping in the hopes of gettin a morsel of conversation from said attractive woman.
This is a modern day occurance. In the past, cock flocks took place at county barn dances.
Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:24:46 EDT (#)
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HELP! I'M BEING HASSLED BY A CHICK!
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:21:51 EDT (#)
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wassa cock flock?
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:18:53 EDT (#)
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Hi M. Let the cock flock begin!
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:15:26 EDT (#)
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Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:19:06 PDT (#)
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Yoko !
oh, it's another yoko...Still, good shit.
hi m, long time no c!
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hi, mess!!!
progr3ss: you will be decimated
:)
Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:10:39 EDT (#)
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It's your turn
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:09:28 EDT (#)
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Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-08-10 22:34:08 PDT (#)
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Nice....
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call me later, kid
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 11:07:52 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-08-10 21:09:45 PDT (#)
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HEY!
I got confussed about half-way through, but then I came roaring back and got it at the end...
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thanks, progr3ss.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 10:56:52 EDT (#)
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wow
means
everything
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-11 10:49:00 EDT (#)
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thank you all.
you got it.
7:45 am
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-11 02:28:26 EDT (#)
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drunk.
asleep.
file name.
hahahhahahhahhhaahhahhahhahahhahahaha
ahahaahahahahhhhahahahahahhahahahahah
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-11 02:27:07 EDT (#)
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wow. if that means anything.
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-08-11 02:19:06 EDT (#)
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Yoko !
oh, it's another yoko...Still, good shit.
hi m, long time no c!
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-11 02:07:46 EDT (#)
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excellent piece.
truly open.
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-11 02:07:14 EDT (#)
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things i have pretended.
only honest with you.
twinsoul
livesoul
onesoul.
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-08-11 01:34:08 EDT (#)
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Nice....
Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-08-11 00:09:45 EDT (#)
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HEY!
I got confussed about half-way through, but then I came roaring back and got it at the end...
Submitted by sir_cowman (user info) at 2007-08-11 00:05:20 EDT (#)
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Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:11:07 EDT (#)
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i love bukowski and silverstein.
sc, you rock.
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Auto +2 for compliments
"Flattery will get you everywhere."
-Doctor Venture
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:25:22 EDT (#)
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We're having a debate here.
Circumsized or no? B says no. Candi asked me if I'd keep the old forskin iffin' I could go back. No idea.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:22:09 EDT (#)
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I'm just a bored guy.
:-(
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:21:01 EDT (#)
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i'm just a jealous guy.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:18:50 EDT (#)
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what's freaked out? Me? I'm not freaked out.
YOU'RE FREAKED OUT!
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:17:57 EDT (#)
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freaked out?
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:17:53 EDT (#)
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or should i say, "how's the vino sauce?"
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:17:19 EDT (#)
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shit.
sorry.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:17:05 EDT (#)
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what does Jealous Guy have to do with this?
i just overlooked it (that thread). freaked for nuffin.
How's the vino?
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:14:06 EDT (#)
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cool. wtf happened?
EVERYONE: John Lennon: Jealous Guy. FTW
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:12:06 EDT (#)
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make it an even +1.
coz you got yer schtuff back. way to go!
I found that thread about my ex, btw. she didn't get in there.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:11:55 EDT (#)
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sorry, Director.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:11:07 EDT (#)
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i love bukowski and silverstein.
sc, you rock.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:11:00 EDT (#)
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http://www.ubersite.com/m/110784
Submitted by sir_cowman (user info) at 2007-08-10 23:09:57 EDT (#)
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Not a fan of poetry, except bukowski and silverstein
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-10 22:47:10 EDT (#)
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i got my fucking gretsch and my beatles albums back today woooooooooooooooooooo!