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Submitted by experima (View user info) at 2007-08-18 13:51:55 EDT
there is no one else but you.
you
only you.
you are in my dreams
my last thoughts before sleep
are of you.
my first thoughts of morning
are interrupted by your
voice.
consistent.
so used to it.
i love you like a million sunrays
piercing the window at midday.
heat up the place
and leave it breathless
breathtaking.
your eyes
i've known them, felt them, loved them.
they've seen me.
oh, how they've seen me.
stories they could tell.
you've seen me at my worst
my best, now
but can you remember when
when
the death of us comes at such inconvenient moments and
god, are you here
to rescue me
to comfort me
to apologise
for wrongs then, wrongs now, wrongs...?
do not
please do not.
for if anything i
have wronged you.
the second i left
if i ever left
i'll regret for the rest of my lives.
never again
User Reviews
Submitted by iambetteratit (user info) at 2008-06-25 15:20:29 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by peacenik_in_hell (user info) at 2008-05-24 23:53:13 EDT (#)
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stirring...
Submitted by ruthless (user info) at 2008-05-11 01:19:29 EDT (#)
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Just emailed you.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2008-05-11 01:12:57 EDT (#)
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my email's on my 10 stories...
Submitted by ruthless (user info) at 2008-05-11 01:10:21 EDT (#)
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Going through tough times, reading your stuff somehow makes me remember when things were really good and makes me wonder why it all has to change.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2008-05-11 01:01:39 EDT (#)
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why?
Submitted by ruthless (user info) at 2008-05-11 00:55:53 EDT (#)
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Reading your posts is making me sad.
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-04-03 16:30:54 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by loan_officer (user info) at 2008-01-26 18:20:03 EST (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2008-01-26 17:57:31 EST (#)
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yes, it was from Adaptation.
Leonore rocks.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-01-02 18:44:44 EST (#)
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This was posted on Shlongy's birthday!
Submitted by Leonore (user info) at 2008-01-02 18:23:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
The poetry was good.
The .gif (from Adaptation, right?) put it over the top.
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-11-09 19:30:12 EST (#)
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Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-27 10:11:56 EDT (#)
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I love this one.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-23 10:12:33 EDT (#)
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promise?
;)
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2007-08-23 07:04:38 EDT (#)
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Submitted by diavola (user info) at 2007-08-20 20:21:53 BST (#)
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No Comment
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Shameless hussy.
You are in need of much reform and punishment. It is with great regret that I offer my services to perform this treatment.
(Did I say 'regret'? Sorry, I meant joy. I make that mistake every time)
Submitted by orph (user info) at 2007-08-21 11:23:54 EDT (#)
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Very nice.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-21 01:15:29 EDT (#)
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thanks, Ax.
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2007-08-20 22:18:27 EDT (#)
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Ah, never mind, I see Ebola May got his account back. I just shot him an email about it, I couldn't log in, I guess he went to Bart and changed the pw.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-20 18:49:35 EDT (#)
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Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-08-20 16:02:33 EDT (#)
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Amusing..
;-)
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-20 16:01:08 EDT (#)
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had to do it mess.
i knew you'd catch that :)
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-08-20 15:57:42 EDT (#)
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Submitted by diavola (user info) at 2007-08-20 15:21:53 EDT (#)
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Shameless alter abuse.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-20 15:24:09 EDT (#)
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thanks, M!
and spot on as usual, ih8.
Submitted by diavola (user info) at 2007-08-20 15:21:53 EDT (#)
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Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2007-08-20 14:03:46 EDT (#)
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+2 experima
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-20 10:20:45 EDT (#)
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I read this again and I don't see this as sad.
I see this as happy.
Maybe I'm out to lunch, but I don't really know the context,
so to me...this is a love poem.
And a beautiful one at that.
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2007-08-20 03:55:56 EDT (#)
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grrr @ aim
Submitted by NintendoCzar (user info) at 2007-08-20 02:39:14 EDT (#)
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What's that sound?
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-19 23:06:39 EDT (#)
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I just mentioned email since it might be more convenient than camping on a shlongy post.
aim = mickitickitavi
Submitted by haikumikoo (user info) at 2007-08-19 20:02:35 EDT (#)
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Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-17 17:14:33 PDT (#)
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sorry...I couldn't resist :)
ps my email's plastered all over my posts.
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I'm assuming you're suggesting that I rummage through your posts to find your email. I figured I'd just let you know that I'm probably not going to do that. Mostly out of laziness, but also because I don't see the point. I only use email to keep in touch with people I already know, letting them know how I'm doing...or something equally boring.
Anyways, since you brought it up, I do have AIM, so I'll just give you that in an attempt to not feel like an asshole.
mw67201
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-08-19 19:40:03 EDT (#)
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Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-19 10:54:05 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Captain_Ambivalent (user info) at 2007-08-19 07:44:19 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-08-19 05:15:43 EDT (#)
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http://diveintomark.org/public/2006/07/you-make-bunny-cry.jpg
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-08-19 04:16:27 EDT (#)
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I eradicated 23 virusses in the last 27 hours.
Not that anybody gives a shit about that. Great post ,M !
Submitted by Wildman (user info) at 2007-08-19 04:01:38 EDT (#)
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Lungfish, there was a time when both you, me, and that Great Person were always on-line @ the same time.
:(
Submitted by locksly (user info) at 2007-08-19 03:21:21 EDT (#)
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seems a bit like:
Submitted by <thedarknessfromabove.at.gmail.com> (View user info) at 2006-07-18 06:14:59 EDT
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pathetic attempts to engage one in bad energy
alas one feels the need to speak
nay, it is not you its me
the blackness calls forward another victim
her name all but forgotten on this plane
everywhere but nowhere what do you see?
respect and dignity are not found here
sleep now sleep
for you cannot label me
under you I grow stronger
calling and beckoning
kings and queens remember me
in ages past I was an oracle
never again to sit that high
gone forever the status I once held
rue the day you crossed my path
under my foot you will lick the heel
losing is all you have
evermore I shall have won...
http://www.ubersite.com/u/paint_it_black
_____
Just joking
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-08-19 02:25:22 EDT (#)
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wow.
Submitted by Technophobe (user info) at 2007-08-18 17:58:35 EDT (#)
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You sound so unhappy sweetheart..you deserve a +2
Submitted by haikumikoo (user info) at 2007-08-18 17:57:00 EDT (#)
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I'm in a good mood, because me and quinn just went to numerous enjoyable yard sales, ate delicious food, and found some things for buying later at the head shop.
If all of that hadn't happened, I would give this a 0.
Everything after "your eyes" was pretty good (1), but everything before that was kind of annoying (-1).
Also, relax woman.
Submitted by bart (user info) at 2007-08-18 17:10:01 EDT (#)
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Stay strong
Submitted by Bohme (user info) at 2007-08-18 16:48:34 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-18 16:06:31 EDT (#)
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Bye, Ubersite. Have a +2.
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2007-08-18 15:42:35 EDT (#)
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You ok?
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2007-08-18 15:19:32 EDT (#)
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because experima loves my voice :P
Submitted by d_prime (user info) at 2007-08-18 15:04:31 EDT (#)
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Has poetry on this site EVER gotten a positive rating?
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-18 14:52:35 EDT (#)
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<3 rob.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-08-18 14:46:17 EDT (#)
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<3
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-18 14:37:58 EDT (#)
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haikumikoo....
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-18 14:35:30 EDT (#)
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yeah, I know SC.
tell haiku to.........
Submitted by SunnyG (user info) at 2007-08-18 14:35:17 EDT (#)
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nahhh lacking something.
Submitted by sir_cowman (user info) at 2007-08-18 14:26:50 EDT (#)
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I read the whole thing, and it feels like something i would have wrote all angst filled in the eighth grade.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-18 14:13:19 EDT (#)
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY SHLONGY!
the gif is from Adaptation.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-18 14:11:09 EDT (#)
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the death of us comes at such inconvenient moments
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2007-08-18 14:03:43 EDT (#)
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thanks, bob.
Submitted by bob (user info) at 2007-08-18 14:02:35 EDT (#)
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