Selfish Suicide (752 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.34 on 27 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (View user info) at 2007-08-31 19:51:42 EDT
Suicide may be the most selfish act out there,
But we all need to be selfish once in a while, don't we?
Flew beside the most selfish pack out there,
But we'll all get what we deserve, won't we?
Had enough of life want to feel death,
It's cold, unfeeling breath against my spine.
Had enough of ignorance, uncaring smiles,
Pretending I'm good when things aren't fine.
The unwanted smiles and unwanting words,
Spoke down unto me by the circling birds,
Waiting to pounce upon my demise,
With careless whispers, dead black eyes.
I have no need for friends or love,
Where I'm going there'll be no pain.
Into my minds heaven I'll float,
Above the clouds, the dark, the rain.
I've given up, I've let them win,
Let life slowly grind me down.
I lost my place, lost my pride,
Happiness is nowhere to be found.
Suicide may be the most selfish act out there,
But we all need to be selfish once in a while, don't we?
Flew beside the most selfish pack out there,
But we'll all get what we deserve, won't we?
Heaven isn't a place. It's a state of mind.
User Reviews
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2007-09-02 22:45:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Poetry and propaganda are two forms that should never meet.
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-09-02 22:20:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
eh
Submitted by NintendoCzar (user info) at 2007-09-02 03:00:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Suicune may be the most rarest pokemon out there,
But we all gotta catch'em all once in a while, don't we?
Heaven isn't a place. It's a state of mind.
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (user info) at 2007-09-02 02:26:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm just looking at the backlog on here. TTOM is shit hot. Plus, who doesn't wanna argue about superman or jesus? Is an age old question.
Submitted by NintendoCzar (user info) at 2007-09-02 02:17:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Stop reviewing old stuff, I clicked on something and it was 2 years old!
But thanks anyway :P
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (user info) at 2007-09-02 01:16:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Surely Uber readers are Uber resistant to tears. And feelings.
Submitted by DeMoNiC (user info) at 2007-09-02 00:16:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Are you trying to make us Uber readers break down and cry? Lol emo poetry ftw.
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (user info) at 2007-09-01 21:44:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I've heard 'em all. `I like you as a friend.' `I think we should see
other people.' `I no speak English.' `I'm married to the sea.' `I
don't want to kill you, but I will ...'
-- Homer Simpson
I Love Lisa
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-09-01 17:41:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-09-01 13:59:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (user info) at 2007-09-01 08:53:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Meh. I'm not emo. Or 13. Do I win?
Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2007-09-01 07:13:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
+1 I can't formulate sentences.
Reads like emo poetry written by a 13 year old.
Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2007-09-01 07:12:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Reads like 13 year old emo poetry. Sorry.
Submitted by beat_raven (user info) at 2007-09-01 04:32:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2007-09-01 03:56:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
yep
Submitted by Wildman (user info) at 2007-09-01 01:29:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
They're 20 fucking years your junior! What thre fuck do you expect!!!
Submitted by lungfish (user info) at 2007-09-01 01:23:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Still doesn't do it for me. Cheer the fuck up.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-09-01 00:25:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
But we'll all get what we deserve, won't we?
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this doesn't happen
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2007-08-31 22:42:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
kill yourself with a knife
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (user info) at 2007-08-31 20:54:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I actually wrote this as a sarcastic poke at someone who told me they wanted to die. They didn't. Pussy.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-08-31 20:53:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I, for one, won't think you're selfish if you go with suicide.
In fact, I'll throw a party.
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (user info) at 2007-08-31 20:29:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
This isn't my journal. I am just posting a bit of what I write on here. It won't be an everyday thing, or probably not even weekly. Just time to time. For feedback mainly. So enjoy or don't, but either way let me know.
Submitted by Death_Metal_Dude (user info) at 2007-08-31 20:29:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
kill yourself
Submitted by beer-turtle (user info) at 2007-08-31 20:18:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
not bad...not good...very emo
If you ever get the chance to read the poetry from several different emo's, they all usually have the same imagery and topics.
Most of these folks contemplating suicide who are ever so tired of life: usually have not lived to begin with.
Play your quarter to the end...suicide is for quitters who haven't even tried.
Attempted suicide though...those fuckers are just failures who can't even kill themselves properly.
Submitted by AllyJeans (user info) at 2007-08-31 20:18:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I think "Made me smile" would be inappropriate. More like, "Made me go hmmmm."
Submitted by Progr3ss (user info) at 2007-08-31 20:11:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Ubersite is a lot of things... but your journal, it is not.
Submitted by Off_The_Wagon (user info) at 2007-08-31 20:10:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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