UGR: That We Might Live (751 hits)
Category: Sound & MusicLabels: UGR_07 captainthorns_music
Rating: 1.85 on 25 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by CaptainThorns (View user info) at 2007-09-11 10:21:14 EDT
Walking down the hallway to my room
I tripped upon a sin
It reminded me of times not long enough ago
And the memories all came flooding back
How I never seemed to win
Took it on the other cheek each day with every blow
Oh, I've seen my faith go wandering
Can you show me that you're there
Cause I can't survive these lonely nights not knowing if you care
Living in your shadow feels so cold
String me up and set me free
Cast away my doubt in you and let the son shine down on me
If you're really watching over me
Could you tell me where to go?
Oh, I wonder as I wander who I've been before
Why have I wound up in such a place?
Can you tell me how it's so?
Could I make a difference if I tried the other door?
Though I've seen my faith go wandering
You have shown me that you're there
And I make it through these lonely nights just knowing that you care
Breaking through your shadow feels so warm
For your life has set me free
As I cast away my doubt and let your son shine down on me
User Reviews
Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2007-09-27 12:01:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I was rude when I first arrived, and people reacted accordingly, but I'm glad I stuck around (most of the time) because I've written more in the last 8 months than I had in the 3 or 4 years prior. I let it die out a while back, and it's nice to be creative again.
Submitted by PayMeLater (user info) at 2007-09-19 22:54:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Plus fucking two!
Submitted by mikethescottish (user info) at 2007-09-13 18:47:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Whilst I don't share the religious sentiment of the song/poem, the level of personal meaning invested in this resonates well.
It's lack of showiness is vaguely reminiscent of later JOhnny Cash- in a good way.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-09-13 17:39:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-09-12 12:17:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:42:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm sick of all this Christian propaganda you spew everywhere.
Write a poem about Zoroastrianism or we're through.
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Done and done! - http://www.ubersite.com/m/111659
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2007-09-11 21:59:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-09-11 18:49:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
TheUniter says hi!
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-09-11 14:00:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-09-11 14:00:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by ih8u2man (user info) at 2007-09-11 13:55:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2007-09-11 13:28:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
nice.
Submitted by Surgeon (user info) at 2007-09-11 13:18:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
babcock..
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-09-11 11:11:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by RabiedRooster (user info) at 2007-09-11 11:07:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2007-09-11 11:03:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:48:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by DrogoRoch (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:41:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Damn you and your Lyrical ways. I'm sure I said something about no singing thing yet here it is in all its 'waiting to be sung' glory.
*Stamps feet and slams door on way out*
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It didn't start out as a song, but it just kind of fell together that way. Sorry dude, music is what's in my blood. Still...I don't think I'll post a recording of this one. It's a bit too personal to me for sharing in this sort of forum.
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:47:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:45:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:42:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm sick of all this Christian propaganda you spew everywhere.
Write a poem about Zoroastrianism or we're through.
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Now THAT is a challenge I'll accept.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:42:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm sick of all this Christian propaganda you spew everywhere.
Write a poem about Zoroastrianism or we're through.
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:41:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
ohhh im just a dumbo CT , very good!!
Submitted by DrogoRoch (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:41:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Damn you and your Lyrical ways. I'm sure I said something about no singing thing yet here it is in all its 'waiting to be sung' glory.
*Stamps feet and slams door on way out*
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:40:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:30:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
CT. ummm dont mean to be picky but son....sun, last sentence or whatever its called
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It's a phonetic play on words...as in the "son of God." Thought the spiritual overtones in this were very evident, but maybe not...
Submitted by TechnoRatty (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:33:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Sing it to me
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:30:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
CT. ummm dont mean to be picky but son....sun, last sentence or whatever its called
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-09-11 10:23:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
UGR round 3 Hub: http://www.ubersite.com/m/111550
Yes, it's another poem-song of mine. No, I won't post a recording of it.