I love you. I mean, whatever ... (621 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.06 on 14 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (View user info) at 2007-09-24 21:07:22 EDT
When I gave you my heart,
It was still intact.
A thousand pieces of hate and pain,
Are what you gave me back.
You lied to me, ignored my calls,
You'd gone to God knows where.
Then come back with "I Love you",
I'd pretend I didn't care.
You'd sweet talk me and win my smile,
One touch is all it takes,
I'd forget about the sorrows,
And all of your mistakes.
Then once again you'd be lost to me,
No reason, no tears, no kiss.
Your so blissfully ignorant,
Because ignorance is bliss.
Again I would forgive you,
But this time could not forget.
Although happy still to have you,
I'd rue the day we met.
I'd dry my tears with a veil of lies,
Hide hate behind my fear.
But all is well, it has to be,
Because you were still here.
Then you decided it was no more,
You didn't like what you had found.
But like a favoured childhood toy,
You decided to keep me around.
Now I've got the time and space,
To look into the past,
I've seen some things, which at the time,
I seem to have looked past.
I hate how you treated me,
You told me we'd be forever.
You lied, so now please leave me to be,
I love you. I mean, whatever...
User Reviews
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (user info) at 2007-09-25 19:53:10 EDT (#)
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Submitted by DeMoNiC (user info) at 2007-09-25 19:43:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-09-26 02:17:09 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Not so fast, Shortfellow.
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Shit like that annoys me, why bother to -2 something when you can't even bother to justify it.
You stupid son of a fucking whore. Die slowly.
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Rock on.
Submitted by DeMoNiC (user info) at 2007-09-25 19:43:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-09-26 02:17:09 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Not so fast, Shortfellow.
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Shit like that annoys me, why bother to -2 something when you can't even bother to justify it.
You stupid son of a fucking whore. Die slowly.
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-09-25 18:50:55 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-09-25 12:17:09 EDT (#)
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Not so fast, Shortfellow.
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (user info) at 2007-09-25 11:57:11 EDT (#)
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Wow. I actually got some decent reviews. Has Uber gone mad? Thank you for the feedback.
Submitted by GodChicken (user info) at 2007-09-25 11:42:49 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-09-25 08:50:33 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by iddqd (user info) at 2007-09-25 02:03:12 EDT (#)
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lol
Submitted by DeMoNiC (user info) at 2007-09-25 01:42:33 EDT (#)
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Do rhyming words hurt your head iddqd?
Submitted by iddqd (user info) at 2007-09-25 00:50:38 EDT (#)
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poetry is for fags
Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2007-09-24 22:25:43 EDT (#)
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Not totally horrible but not rockin' either
Submitted by DeMoNiC (user info) at 2007-09-24 22:07:37 EDT (#)
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Lol, Respek, you just have a chip on your shoulder because some fags mocked your poetry.
Submitted by Respek (user info) at 2007-09-24 21:49:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Pretty cool. Kind of a surface poem though; you don't really have to think too hard to see what you were getting at. Have a 1
Submitted by DeMoNiC (user info) at 2007-09-24 21:26:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice, I like.