Nobody notice me any days now (679 hits)
Category: NoneRating: 1.45 on 23 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by skrapmetal (View user info) at 2007-09-27 17:51:35 EDT
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I hide in big room. Many paths, much light. Many places to hide.
I hide in place for a long time, since Lady leave me here. Food is here. I am warm.
Many times nobody in place and I roam paths. Eat food. Make hiding places above floor on racks.
Many days I hide in room and no one sees. I hide in racks, in small rooms, in cold bins. Sometimes I look for Lady but she not in place. Others come to place, they walk and take things from racks. Sometimes they take things from right in front of me, but they still not see me. I hide.
Childs see me sometimes. They smile or run. They tell their Ladys and sometimes their Ladys look for me. But I hide.
Somtimes I hide where I can see others line up to leave place. They have taken things from racks and bins and they leave. Somtimes others are standing with plates of good-smell food. I want to have some but I am hiding. Always they leave before place is empty. So I eat cold food.
Many days I am in place. Long time. I hide and am not seen. Nobody notice me any days now.
Others are not seeing.
User Reviews
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2007-10-12 16:02:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-10-01 16:36:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
like
Submitted by 8track (user info) at 2007-09-29 09:22:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
even if you were not a dickhead i would minus 2 this
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2007-09-28 14:40:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I am confused, yet somehow aroused.
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-09-28 09:01:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I hide in place for a long time, since Lady leave me here.
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AHA!!! A homesick abortion! I finally get it.
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-09-28 08:53:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Sloth?
SLOTH LOVE CHUNK!
Submitted by zwerg (user info) at 2007-09-28 08:46:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by FALLEN (user info) at 2007-09-28 08:40:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
mouse?
Submitted by Wildman (user info) at 2007-09-28 03:22:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
cockroach
Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2007-09-28 03:14:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This was really good. I like cats, so in my imagination, it's a cat.
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2007-09-28 01:50:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2007-09-28 01:41:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Bigmike (user info) at 2007-09-27 21:20:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I rate this high because it is a bandwagon of my original.
Oh, and it seems to be a pretty cool read as well.
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-09-27 20:45:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Roach or Rat?
Submitted by BranDo (user info) at 2007-09-27 20:05:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
SPT: Shopping Post Thursday
As usual an angle on things a wee bit differing.
Skrap as Skrap should be.
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2007-09-27 20:02:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-09-27 17:54:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 Supermarket Mowgli.
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I am so naming my next band Supermarket Mowgli, and you are so getting in free to every show.
Submitted by DeMoNiC (user info) at 2007-09-27 19:57:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
W-T-F
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-09-27 19:06:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
do not want
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-09-27 18:15:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-09-27 18:06:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
What do you think, bud?
Submitted by DangerPants (user info) at 2007-09-27 18:04:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-09-27 17:54:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 Supermarket Mowgli.
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You mean Mogwai? Because Mowgli is the kid in Jungle Book....
Submitted by BlinkinTurtle (user info) at 2007-09-27 17:55:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-09-27 17:54:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 Supermarket Mowgli.
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Rawk!
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-09-27 17:54:16 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 Supermarket Mowgli.