A Midnight post ----- Not Coming Back (612 hits)
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Submitted by TechnoRatty (View user info) at 2007-09-29 19:11:10 EDT
Hello Daddy,
I haven't seen you for two weeks now daddy. Mummy says your not coming back. I don't believe her. She says that you would come back, but you can't. She says that you're very, very happy, 'cos you're in heaven. But I don't think that you can be happy because you said that you loved my mummy, and you loved me. But we're not there, are we daddy?
It's my birthday tomorrow. I wish you were here. I miss you. I start school soon. Mummy says that she'll take me, but I wish that you would drive me. Mummy's gone back to normal. I've got a new sister. Mummy says that she came out of mummy's tummy and that's why she was fat. I told her I didn't think she was ever fat. She giggled. But then she cried. She does that loads now. I can hear her at night. She cries even more that the baby does. We named the baby for you. Mummy said that you liked the namePenny. So that's her name now. Mummy cries because she says that Penny will never see you. But you wouldn't leave us, would you daddy?
Love
Gemma
xxxx
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Submitted by beat_raven (user info) at 2007-11-23 13:49:54 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
http://storywrite.com/story/46076
Never really written anything, have you?
Submitted by lover101 (user info) at 2007-10-01 12:44:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Anansie (user info) at 2007-10-01 11:30:02 EDT (#)
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See, now all I can think is that a psychotic immortal ninja, who can only be defeated by pouring a ridiculous amount of melted gold all over him and leaving him at the bottom of the ocean, wrote this.
By the way, next time you make a movie, try not to have a full five minutes of it be ninjas carrying boxes, to drums beating, causing you to think to yourself, "Duh, duh, DUH, duh, DUH, duh, DUH, duh... boxes, boxes, ninjas carryin' boxes... BOXES, BOXES, NINJAS CARRYIN' BOXES."
Submitted by DirtyHarry (user info) at 2007-10-01 11:08:54 EDT (#)
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owned
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2007-10-01 09:19:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Needs more rape.
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2007-10-01 08:55:54 EDT (#)
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sad about sums it up.
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-09-30 22:05:36 EDT (#)
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-09-30 22:05:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-09-30 19:45:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
too contrived
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2007-09-30 16:52:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
GO PHILS WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
Submitted by Flack (user info) at 2007-09-30 12:29:32 EDT (#)
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I've seen a letter like this.
A guy I knew in the Army, his youngest daughter wrote it. She was 5.
He died a few weeks before his son was born.
I cry every time I think of it.
I'm such a puss.
Submitted by ICO (user info) at 2007-09-30 12:18:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
What monkeyswithguns said.
Submitted by Fungah (user info) at 2007-09-30 11:14:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
That thing with the wet hair is fucking terrifying
Submitted by 8track (user info) at 2007-09-30 08:41:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
i wish you would never come back. not die, just go and never come back.
Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2007-09-30 03:14:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-09-29 19:50:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Damn, that's a depressing picture.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2007-09-30 02:06:54 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-09-30 02:06:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by maiorano84 (user info) at 2007-09-30 02:05:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
That looks like one hell of a wet t-shirt contest.
Submitted by aldenso (user info) at 2007-09-30 01:25:39 EDT (#)
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Does anyone have more pics of that babe?
Submitted by Wildman (user info) at 2007-09-29 21:37:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
skate it off
Submitted by lechuza (user info) at 2007-09-29 21:28:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I get that look a lot
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2007-09-29 19:51:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Hahahaha
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-09-29 19:50:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Damn, that's a depressing picture.
Submitted by beer-turtle (user info) at 2007-09-29 19:40:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
You trying to get a job writing for Disney or something?