The stars aligned in our favour (419 hits)
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Submitted by Cool Beans (View user info) at 2007-10-03 03:07:42 EDT
The stars aligned in our favour
They shine and shine, shine and shine
Why do I hesitate? Why can't I enunciate?
The words....that.....are running through my mind
I see you there, cold and bare, nothing but a breeze blows by....
A satisfaction, a fatal attraction, I've fallen in love and its do or die.....
Beauty unmatched
Skin so
I'm a vagabond man, searching for answers. But all I find are clues to puzzles unsolved. I hunt and I scavenge, for the only prize on earth that matters: love. An elusive bounty that is sure to come my way through perseverance and faith. Unlikely is the expected result of my quest, near impossible at the moment. Continue to search I must, for good luck comes to those who relentlessly seek their goal.
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Submitted by maf54 (user info) at 2008-05-14 16:16:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2008-05-12 13:42:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2007-10-04 15:16:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2007-10-03 07:30:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This wasn't bad. Re: filename, what?
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No imagination was used in the creation of this filename... sorry.
Submitted by DudeThatsBOSH (user info) at 2007-10-03 12:20:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by DangerPants (user info) at 2007-10-03 11:17:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Cool.
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2007-10-03 10:51:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
<wishfull thinking> Ubersite is a serial writers forum.
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Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2007-10-03 10:34:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
ok
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-10-03 08:51:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
"Continue to search I must"
Yoda?
Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2007-10-03 07:30:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This wasn't bad. Re: filename, what?
Submitted by Darth_Famine (user info) at 2007-10-03 07:27:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Come here, you little raven!
-- Homer Simpson
Treehouse of Horror
Submitted by ShapeShifter (user info) at 2007-10-03 07:10:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Go back to being gone. You weren't missed :*(
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-10-03 04:18:35 EDT (#)
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-10-03 04:18:26 EDT (#)
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Submitted by pshuu (user info) at 2007-10-03 03:31:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Is this a poem? It comes together like one. I like the last line.