Untamed (257 hits)
Category: GeneralRating: 0.8 on 6 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by shadow (View user info) at 2007-10-10 11:28:03 EDT
I crouch. I wait. I watch.
I am the ninja of suburbia, I am the ghost of Maple Street. I am a hunter. I am wild. I am without a master, I answer to no man.
I stalk my prey like a tiger on the trial of a stag, watching... waiting. Like a leopard winding my way down from the treetops I slink along the stairs, the carpet muffling each step like tall grass beneath my muscled form. I spy the home of my victim through the banister. The target rests motionless on the chair. Unaware. Unprepared. The set-up is perfect. My plan is working. I shall not be denied my prey.
I have thought about this moment endlessly, I am ready to strike. No! Too soon! I must be patient, I must not be rash. I have waited so long, a few more moments will not deter me. As a lion surveys the wide plains of untamed Africa, I watch the doors, the windows, the fireplace, all exits. It is quiet. It is as though the world outside holds its breath with me, waiting with me, knowing as I know that the moment has almost arrived. I feel the desire well up in me, my mouth waters. Every inch of my body is poised, tense and ready.
I will attack my prey. I will take my prey to the ground. I will rend the form of my prey. I will consume my prey, and when I have had my fill of the body of my prey I will spread the remains in all directions; a testament to my prowess, my cunning and my unending hunger... a warning to all who come after that I am a hunter, a beast, a creature that does not honor the conventions of man.
I am wild...
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Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2008-04-17 14:28:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 for you!
Submitted by DirtyHarry (user info) at 2007-10-10 11:37:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2007-10-10 11:31:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Repost it quick, with the picture further down.
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2007-10-10 11:30:26 EDT (#)
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I know! I should repost
Submitted by MudWhistle (user info) at 2007-10-10 11:30:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
don't you find the underscore to be a pain in the ass?
you can save filenames with spaces and skip the whole underscore thing...if you like
i'm just sayin.
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2007-10-10 11:29:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Being able to see the picture spoiled it.