verdant (warning: poetry) (448 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: 0.91 on 13 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by triangle_man (View user info) at 2007-10-17 14:34:32 EDT
Green is so green
like kermit
like spring
like all of the bile the IRS brings
the color of money
and envy
and ivy
like salad and garnish
all parsely and chivey
so verdant this prose
to mind these thoughts spring
and hope a new color
tomorrow may bring
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Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-10-20 09:27:04 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Wompom (user info) at 2007-10-17 22:14:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Even the picture is awesome.
Submitted by Wompom (user info) at 2007-10-17 22:14:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This is fucking awesome read out loud.
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-10-17 18:47:02 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2007-10-17 16:48:52 EDT (#)
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I don't understand how many hands are in the picture and how they are positioned
Submitted by Fungah (user info) at 2007-10-17 16:31:46 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-10-17 15:35:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Homer: I want everyone to know that this is Ned Flanders ... my
friend!
Lenny: What'd he say?
Carl: I dunno. Somethin' about being gay.
Homer Loves Flanders
Submitted by TechnoRatty (user info) at 2007-10-17 15:29:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I love poetry,
Here is a special poem that was written for me
Roses are ummmmm...,
violets are well uhhhhhhh,
shut up and go make me a sandwich!
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-10-17 15:19:52 EDT (#)
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i like the picture
Submitted by Paralyzed_By_Hope (user info) at 2007-10-17 14:58:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Not a big fan of poetry. It made me smile.
And I liked the picture. It's coolness.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-10-17 14:54:56 EDT (#)
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This is perhaps the deepest piece you've written. There's just not a lot of hand holding, is all.
Every word should be approached as if it was a twenty ton weight. Heavy, man. Heavy.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2007-10-17 14:38:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Auto poetry +2.
Submitted by MudWhistle (user info) at 2007-10-17 14:37:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
better than Orgasmatron