Schizo poem (426 hits)
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Submitted by Dalai Queso (View user info) at 2007-10-20 15:08:22 EDT
I don't think like you. You turn away.
I don't act like you. You call me gay.
I don't talk like you. You feel dismayed.
I don't like you. You grow afraid.
Unpredictable, those scary eyes
So atypical, you realize.
My capacities you cannot gauge,
eccentricities, a hint of rage.
Someone different, unfamiliar,
Odd behavior, so peculiar.
Difference creates in you a fear,
So alienate 'til I disappear.
You arrogant bastard, you vain fool.
Pathetic sheep, consumerist tool.
You're not upset by what I do,
You're just upset that I'm not you.
Shock and terror when I emerge,
suppressed emotions erupt and surge.
You all hate me, so I hate you.
You all hurt me, so I hurt you.
Harmless Emo, pathetic youth,
Listen to screamo, remain uncouth.
Or hate and plot then realize
violent fantasies of pain's demise.
Creative writing, outlet of pain,
submit for review, thrive on disdain.
Anonymity, become deranged.
Accountability, nothing changed.
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Submitted by robotfuel (user info) at 2007-11-01 00:57:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
"Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
I'm schizophrenic,
and so am I."
Personally I love Bill Murray's immortalization of the poem in the highly underrated "What about Bob?"
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2007-10-22 20:17:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I fucking love it.
Submitted by ooQueso (user info) at 2007-10-22 13:05:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Schizo does not always denote Schizophrenic, nor does Schizophrenic always denote multiple personalities. In this case, Schizo is referential to Schizotypal, occasionally a precusor to, but a step down from Schizophrenia.
Submitted by BLITZKREIG_BOB (user info) at 2007-10-22 12:03:02 EDT (#)
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Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
I'm schizophrenic,
and so am I.
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-10-22 11:54:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Not a poem - lyrics to Jewel's "Pieces of You." This post reminded me of that song.
Submitted by Wompom (user info) at 2007-10-22 11:29:32 EDT (#)
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That, CaptainThorns, was a nifty poem.
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2007-10-22 08:46:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
She's an ugly girl, does it make you want to kill her
She's an ugly girl, do you want to kick in her face
She's an ugly girl, she doesn't pose a threat
She's an ugly girl, does she make you feel safe
Ugly girl, ugly girl, do you hate her
'Cause she's pieces of you?
She's a pretty girl, does she make you think nasty thoughts
She's a pretty girl, do you want to tie her down
She's a pretty girl, do you call her a bitch
She's a pretty girl, did she sleep with your whole town
Pretty girl, pretty girl, do you hate her
'Cause she's pieces of you
You say he's a faggot, does it make you want to hurt him
You say he's a faggot, do you want to bash in his brain
You say he's a faggot, does he make you sick to our stomach
You say he's a faggot, are you afraid you're just the same
Faggot, Faggot, do you hate him
'Cause he's pieces of you
You say he's a Jew, does it mean that he's tight
You say he's a Jew, do you want to hurt his kids tonight
You say he's a Jew, he'll never wear that funny hat again
You say he's a Jew, as though being born were a sin
Oh Jew, oh Jew, do you hate him
'Cause he's pieces of you
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2007-10-22 03:16:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Val (user info) at 2007-10-21 14:44:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Huge fan of poetry and poetic license and all that. I didn't enjoy this but I applaud the effort.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2007-10-21 14:05:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Fungah (user info) at 2007-10-20 17:57:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
This is fucking terrible.
Submitted by Wompom (user info) at 2007-10-20 17:24:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Yikes
Submitted by ghola (user info) at 2007-10-20 16:50:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No Comment
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2007-10-20 16:42:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by Dexter-Brown (user info) at 2007-10-20 15:21:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Good.