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Submitted by Xgod_called_in_sickX (View user info) at 2007-12-11 16:54:18 EST
ive been aroudn here fgor a little while, thought id say hey and make my first thread/topic/node watever you guys call it. i have exprience in other web forums and i figured id braden my horizons. as a greeting, i offer you one of my many poems wich ill be putting up here from now on. well get to know each other and you all look real cool n shit so yeh heres it
this ones called a time for all mirrors to be broken
nobody cries like her
nobody can tell me otherwise
despite what they say
i am strong but i will break
i cant help the laughter as she cries
as all the joy within me dies
its just on the outside, not in my eyes
my malady hovers around me like flies, everywhere i go
please dont touch me just to find
someone who can feel, broken dead and alone
you can take my laughter away you can take it as you want
but you will never take my pain
and now she lies crying at my feet
i feel throuh some conection our thoughts are one
and all i feel is the same as i ever have
nothing but pain, unrelentless, everlasting, overpowerful.
if the reception is good ill do more an maybe eventualy i will show you all a picture of my
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Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2007-12-15 00:43:47 EST (#)
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Submitted by Xgod_called_in_sickX (user info) at 2007-12-11 16:17:33 PST (#)
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fuck this site. fuck all of you. fuck this site im never coming back. youve all lost a good potential writer
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my love for you is like making fuck
berserekererrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
Submitted by simple_catalyst (user info) at 2007-12-13 11:40:28 EST (#)
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if the reception is good ill do more an maybe eventualy i will show you all a picture of my
alter?
Submitted by frankthebear (user info) at 2007-12-11 19:37:15 EST (#)
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you have to be patient, believe me, I know.
Just work on improving your punctuation and keep trying different things, you'll catch on
Submitted by Xgod_called_in_sickX (user info) at 2007-12-11 19:17:33 EST (#)
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fuck this site. fuck all of you. fuck this site im never coming back. youve all lost a good potential writer
Submitted by G-prime (user info) at 2007-12-11 19:08:44 EST (#)
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it got taken off because it blows. hard. now go cut yourself some more.
Submitted by BeforeEmily (user info) at 2007-12-11 19:01:11 EST (#)
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-2 exsanguinate
Submitted by Xgod_called_in_sickX (user info) at 2007-12-11 18:43:59 EST (#)
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seriously why did it get taken off??
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2007-12-11 18:28:56 EST (#)
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pssssssst: alter boy.
you are overcooking it on the 'pretend i don't know how the site works; v.1.01' - tone it down a little. It'd be a shame to give yourself up on the first post.
Submitted by Xgod_called_in_sickX (user info) at 2007-12-11 18:16:26 EST (#)
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why isnt this on the list of threads? did one of you take it off or something?
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:58:10 EST (#)
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Hey, look....It's ee cummings II.
I LOVE what you've done with capital letters, you fucking shitspot.
Submitted by G-prime (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:46:53 EST (#)
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whats wrong with this is that you are a whiny piece of shit that is only clogging up my beautiful life with your self pity. this place isn't for you.
Submitted by loki (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:41:08 EST (#)
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train wreck
Submitted by Xgod_called_in_sickX (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:40:59 EST (#)
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what is wrong with this? i read somewhere this is a writers forum. it looks like lots of jokes n shit and some comdey but seriously why are you all so negative
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:33:55 EST (#)
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Submitted by triangle_man (user info) at 2007-12-11 22:19:28 GMT (#)
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native tongue
that got me
where's that damn camwhore
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Look out for my Christmas special. If you meant me.
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:30:43 EST (#)
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this node sucks
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:28:24 EST (#)
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fuck off.
Submitted by Axolotl (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:26:37 EST (#)
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fuck off
Submitted by G-prime (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:22:30 EST (#)
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what the flying fuck is wrong with you?
Submitted by Xgod_called_in_sickX (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:20:02 EST (#)
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english is my first language. its my only one maybe its not so good but i will blame that one on the drugs lol
Submitted by triangle_man (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:19:28 EST (#)
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native tongue
that got me
where's that damn camwhore
Submitted by triangle_man (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:18:02 EST (#)
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i made my girlfriend cry
a lot
i wrote it dowmn
you called it squat
epiphany
i put my feeling on my sleeve
godammit
i laughed outside
but cried inside
like
like
that fucking eyetie clown
i forgot
now im sad again
lithium
Submitted by Paralyzed_By_Hope (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:13:43 EST (#)
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Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:10:07 EST (#)
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ive been aroudn here fgor a little while, thought id say hey and make my first thread/topic/node watever you guys call it. i have exprience in other web forums and i figured id braden my horizons. as a greeting, i offer you one of my many poems wich ill be putting up here from now on. well get to know each other and you all look real cool n shit so yeh heres it
If english is your native tongue, I will eat my hat sir.
Hahaha.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:10:07 EST (#)
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ive been aroudn here fgor a little while, thought id say hey and make my first thread/topic/node watever you guys call it. i have exprience in other web forums and i figured id braden my horizons. as a greeting, i offer you one of my many poems wich ill be putting up here from now on. well get to know each other and you all look real cool n shit so yeh heres it
If english is your native tongue, I will eat my hat sir.
Submitted by Xgod_called_in_sickX (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:09:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
sorry Triangle_Man you didnt insult me its the others. but youre not being much more suportive than them
Submitted by Xgod_called_in_sickX (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:08:06 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
yeh english is my native tongue why? and i dont believe you read it triangle_man, cause if you did you wouldnt just insult me like that without anything constructive
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:06:44 EST (#)
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My night is your day. While you are at work I am sitting here naked, smelling all freah and sweet after my bath. Happy thoughts for you, Triangle_Man
Submitted by triangle_man (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:03:10 EST (#)
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Orphy...it's still day over here.
But no more exciting
And yes I read the whole thing
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:03:03 EST (#)
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"if the reception is good ill do more an maybe eventualy i will show you all a picture of my"
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...sledghammered, burned, ground to bits, and buried computer, if you please.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:02:54 EST (#)
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Is english your native tongue?
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:02:40 EST (#)
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shenanigans.
Submitted by Xgod_called_in_sickX (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:01:05 EST (#)
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did you even read the poem?
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2007-12-11 17:00:39 EST (#)
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Uber gets awfully gay at night
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2007-12-11 16:59:42 EST (#)
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yeah...unless you have tits, you're probably not going to do so well around here.
Submitted by triangle_man (user info) at 2007-12-11 16:59:10 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
neebs mor loi katz