Decay (350 hits)
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Submitted by Eugene_Luther (View user info) at 2008-01-04 08:22:10 EST
Gorgeous eyes.
That was the first thing I noticed, illuminated by bright light. They were surrounded by the softest face you could imagine, soothing. Her short blond hair was tied back with a few wisps escaping and falling across her face. I was stunned. I could only stare, my mouth agape.
Throughout my life I had seen pictures in churches and art galleries of angels, descending from heaven. Now there was one before me and I was totally unable to speak.
Her eyes, emerald green were effervescent and as I stared, unable to look away, I felt my stomach tremble and I sank all the way to the bottom of them.
I never believed in love at first sight or first sound but her Polish accent was soft and alluring. She was gentle and sensitive and I felt totally at ease. This had never happened to me before and I didn't want it to again. She was the one, she was perfect.
I could only look up into her face as she looked down at mine. I wondered what was thinking, I wondered if her skin, bathed in light, was as soft to the touch as it looked. I wondered what her name was, what made her laugh and smile, what she dreamt about. I hoped I would have the chance to find out when she said in her perfect accent,
'There's some tartar and you need a filling, now this may hurt a little.'
Perhaps she wasn't my type
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2008-01-06 20:14:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
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Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2008-01-06 20:13:59 EST (#)
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Submitted by regal1975 (user info) at 2008-01-05 19:22:16 EST (#)
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Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2008-01-04 15:32:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
"her Polish accent was soft and alluring"
Wrong.
Submitted by Falafel (user info) at 2008-01-04 15:24:27 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
After I read the third paragraph, I surmised that this story was going to end with the beautiful girl being a corpse and you doing her.
Just goes to show how fucked up this website has made me.
Submitted by Fungah (user info) at 2008-01-04 12:58:23 EST (#)
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I'd like to defecate in your cereal.
Submitted by polyamorousaj (user info) at 2008-01-04 11:28:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Grimm (user info) at 2008-01-04 09:55:46 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I wish your personal rate of decay would increase
Submitted by EkO (user info) at 2008-01-04 09:09:52 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by Tjhom (user info) at 2008-01-04 08:45:55 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
goodtimes all round
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2008-01-04 08:35:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
That was meant to be a +1, so you'll get a total +1 from me.
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2008-01-04 08:35:19 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Gheys ONLY!