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Category: NoneRating: -0.6 on 12 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by cerpin_taxt (View user info) at 2008-02-27 00:09:06 EST
I find beauty in her soul
from as far as the sun.
She appears in dreams
as present in life.
When I was lost
her words familiar.
Attracted to her soul
my intimidated spirit.
User Reviews
Submitted by Ltap (user info) at 2008-02-27 09:56:34 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment, moron.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-02-27 07:30:31 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-02-27 09:56:39 GMT (#)
Ranking: -2
Another victory for poetry. I love this! Job well done.
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Agreed.
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-02-27 04:56:39 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Another victory for poetry.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2008-02-27 04:55:30 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
It just occurred to me that you could, in fact, be one of those idiots that doesn't actually pay enough attention around here to realize that this whole multiple posting thing is annoying and stupid.
God damn I hate stupid people... so lets just hope you are just being inadvertently annoying.
I mean, not only does your post immediately get replaced with the latest submission (ie- only ONE of your posts will exist on the front page at any one time.) it also tends to clog up the Most Recently Reviewed list, which pisses off the collection of uppity nerds that nomadically roam around this wasteland of random goodness.
So do yourself a favor and post once a day.
...and try not to continue with the whole sucking thing.
OK. Good talk.
Submitted by woolfe (user info) at 2008-02-27 04:19:58 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
this makes perkman or rayg look quality.
Submitted by iddqd (user info) at 2008-02-27 01:30:18 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by iddqd (user info) at 2008-02-27 01:30:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by iddqd (user info) at 2008-02-27 01:29:29 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
hahaha. have a another joint and go listen some more to mars volta and reflect on how 'deep' you are, douchebag.
Submitted by JonnyX (user info) at 2008-02-27 01:22:45 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2008-02-27 00:49:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Didn't read your poems... I'm sure they have some sort of merit.
I just dig your uber-entry. Ya got moxy, kid.
Welcome.
Submitted by Fartman (user info) at 2008-02-27 00:15:17 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Welcome, velcommen, bienvenue, come on in.
Oh, how very ordinary.
Submitted by GodChicken (user info) at 2008-02-27 00:14:01 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
YOUR POETRY SUCKS CUNT CURDS
Submitted by ilikesteak (user info) at 2008-02-27 00:13:51 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked this for no apparent reason.
Nice job.