finality? (397 hits)
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Submitted by Antioxident (View user info) at 2008-03-02 23:59:25 EST
Interestingly inappropriate, inanimate objects intimately inter-tangled in ever so slightly conservative garments. The sun sets nigh upon the devils red colored sky with trails of steam left by consumerist travelers making their way home in the waning light. Their trips leaving their mark upon the night lights. Some how, some where a business man is dying, some how some where, a mother is crying. Vast continents shift and make their way closer and further, friendships budding and ending. Mega movie stars constantly in motion, cars speeding down the freeway in the blur of red and white. What is constant, and who is forgiven? What is involved and who has repented? Lonely strip malls and closed casinos line the valley of the damned, and they are just one last sight on the flight of man. For what purpose is all of this world? Wheels spinning, rotors turning, gas powered electric LEDs surround all those living. The red yellow and green are the gods we pray to, the last gleaming glimpse of the real before neon glow zips past in peripheral, headed to who knows where.
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Submitted by Lib (user info) at 2008-03-03 14:37:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2008-03-03 09:20:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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I too am a big fan of non-stop train of thought, prose in motion without a full stop.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-03-03 05:34:50 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
'Even though I'm a nobody'
Submitted by X54 (user info) at 2008-03-03 01:01:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Fuckin A
Submitted by Wildman (user info) at 2008-03-03 00:26:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
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Submitted by Socialist_Joe (user info) at 2008-03-03 00:10:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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