A Smile (532 hits)
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Submitted by Paralyzed By Hope (View user info) at 2008-03-04 10:25:31 EST
When he put his hand over her knee, she smiled.
When he leaned his head closer, she stopped breathing.
When he put his lips against the skin of her neck, she moaned.
When she turned to face him, he kissed her.
When she stared at him with a combination of fear and desire, he kissed her again.
When she made a small defeated, yet pleased sigh, he kissed her more.
Good girls do not have sex for sex sake. At least, that's what she was told. Good girls fall in love and then have sex. It's the 21st century, so good girls don't need to have a ring on their finger any more, but good girls do not have sex for sex sake.
His hand rested on the upward curve of her hip. The sheets covering them were slightly damp and she felt sticky, sweaty, and thoroughly satisfied. He had been asleep for almost an hour now. In the back of her mind, she wondered if he'd be ready for another round. She pushed the thought away. She was a good girl, after all. Good girls don't have nightlong marathons with practical strangers. Although she broke one golden rule, it didn't mean she wanted to continue her descent into good girl hell.
She sat up, pulling her legs to her chest, clutching the sheet against her breasts. The room didn't have a lot of furniture. A dresser and a bed. Minimalist. Bachelor. She gazed at the top drawer of his dresser. He had reached into that drawer earlier to get the condom. She wondered how many condoms he had in there, how many he used in a week, how many other girls had been in her spot on the bed. Seemed to her that it should matter. Closing her eyes, she concentrated on the small pit of her stomach. The place where you feel the kick of shame. The place where your heart drops in disappointment. She was waiting for the prickle, the twinge of disgrace. It wasn't coming. She thought it might have appeared mid-coitus, as her fingernails dragged across the skin of his back and his mouth covered her breast. But all she felt was the radiating heat, the burn, the craving.
He moved, turning over to look at her. He reached his hand up, running it down the line of her spine. His hand inched around her waist and back up to graze the round curve of her breast. It took little effort on his part to draw her closer to him. Her hair fell across his face as she hovered over him. He smiled at her. She smiled back. Then he kissed her and in one fluid motion, swept her around to her back. He knelt over her and stopped for a moment, letting his eyes wander over her skin, her curves. He waited another moment as she stared up at him. He saw the shyness flicker in her eyes. He waited. She bit her lip and squirmed. He waited. Then an embarrassed smile spread across her lips and he dove. She arched against his sudden move and cried out with delight.
In her car, she stared at the steering wheel. She thought that the shame she knew she needed to feel might have an easier time coming when she was fully dressed. But the hollow of her stomach felt warm and calm. She forced a frown and looked in the rearview mirror, trying to prod a few tears. Still nothing. She told herself how evil she was, how disgusting, to sleep with a man she hardly knew. But the pit of her stomach only grew warmer at the memory of his lips, his touch. She looked at the mirror again and shook her head. Instead of tears, she got a broad, contented smile.
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Submitted by loopdeloo (user info) at 2008-03-07 15:04:25 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Fantastic! :)
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-03-04 16:52:52 EST (#)
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Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2008-03-04 16:12:49 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Hookhand (user info) at 2008-03-04 15:55:17 EST (#)
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Submitted by X54 (user info) at 2008-03-04 10:57:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
Maybe just her first time with a practical stranger. He was practical, keeping his condoms within arms reach of the bed.
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Lolz
Submitted by ubetidid (user info) at 2008-03-04 12:44:32 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
perfect
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2008-03-04 12:40:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2008-03-04 12:34:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by ChaosJester (user info) at 2008-03-04 12:32:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Yummy.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2008-03-04 12:00:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
'Starts with an S right here... and its a mile to the other ear.
A smile - goes a long, long way.'
Great story.
Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2008-03-04 11:48:19 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This was fantastic. I would give it a 3+ if I could.
Submitted by Ltap (user info) at 2008-03-04 11:29:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Awesome story.
Submitted by woolfe (user info) at 2008-03-04 11:18:23 EST (#)
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Submitted by X54 (user info) at 2008-03-04 10:57:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
"He saw the shyness flicker in her eyes." POV slip?
Was it her first time? It almost seemed like it, but then again it kind of didn't. Maybe just her first time with a practical stranger. He was practical, keeping his condoms within arms reach of the bed.
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2008-03-04 10:54:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2008-03-04 10:49:34 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Quite nice.
Submitted by DrogoRoch (user info) at 2008-03-04 10:42:56 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
One of the better things I have read in quite a while. I enjoyed it.
She will become a raving nympho now, lovely.
Submitted by GodChicken (user info) at 2008-03-04 10:42:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Glizz (user info) at 2008-03-04 10:34:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked the confict, it made for an interesting flavor.