The Purge (flash horror) (416 hits)
Category: NoneRating: -1 on 10 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Oscar Z Acosta (View user info) at 2008-03-11 06:08:23 EDT
The men from the village were there, he knew them all, or at least he used to know them, because now they looked only slightly familiar, changed far beyond their filthy flesh and dishevelled clothing. They moved with an awkwardness that made them appear unnatural. Their paralysed faces were set and expressionless; it was as if they had been carved from the cold grey rock of the prison gate from which they were emerging.
The faces were dead, but the eyes were alive, everyone had red rimmed eyes that shone with the cold fire of fear, darting left and right, trying to comprehend what was happening.
Terror dragged his stomach towards the floor as the harsh metallic sound of the machine-gun being cocked reverberated around the courtyard...
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Submitted by loopdeloo (user info) at 2008-03-19 12:28:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2008-03-11 12:32:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
flash review:
die.
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2008-03-11 11:42:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
awful
Submitted by Rhymenocerous (user info) at 2008-03-11 11:26:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 because Resident Evil 4 kicks major ass.
I eagerly await RE5.
Submitted by Yozz (user info) at 2008-03-11 10:15:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
shone?
Submitted by DrogoRoch (user info) at 2008-03-11 10:12:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
..cocked reverberated around the courtyard...
Harold looked around at the wild eyes again. His pants were now soiled and he was finding it quite hard to contain what was trying to rush down his leg. Oh to die with shit running down your leg was too much.....
Submitted by Ltap (user info) at 2008-03-11 09:38:59 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
The only horror was at how bad your writing was.
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-03-11 07:19:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
You should re-consider...
Submitted by hour_man (user info) at 2008-03-11 07:18:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
This was awful.
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-03-11 06:40:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
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