On loss (631 hits)
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Submitted by Zoobie2000 (View user info) at 2008-03-30 20:49:59 EDT
Thank you for reading this. Sitting there in your comfortable room. Relaxed and warm. I am here in front of my keyboard. I have been outside tonight. For the first time in a week. The people were happy. They were looking around at each other. There was a time when I myself was happy. Once long ago there was a time when I was innocent. When things were green. When trees grew and grass was cut. When I was looking outside the window at the mountain. Then there came a time that changed things. It was not a gradual change. It didn't shift slowly. It exploded into shards. I was left lying on the floor.
After a while I wake up. Time passes. Then I am here. Now what are the sequences of events which brought this frame, this mind to this point? On the edge? Wavering and wondering. When she dies I lose myself. It is all I can do to cope. Crying is my only enjoyment. For surely a man with a broken leg is glad of his pain? The plaster cast holding him in is a symbol, as if to say that one day his leg might be worthy of something. Cut it off. If your eye offends you then gouge it out. Your leg is worthless.
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Submitted by Ltap (user info) at 2008-03-31 13:34:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
No Comment
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2008-03-31 12:23:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
what is this...
is there some unexamined life, dime store philosophy bandwagon i was unaware of?
Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2008-03-31 11:09:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
In the immortal words of Artie Lange
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-03-31 11:04:46 EDT (#)
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If you're looking for a "Shlongy's Greatest Hits" collection, surely you could do better than THIS:
Submitted by zoobie2000 (user info) at 2008-03-30 22:31:10 EDT (#)
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here follows Shlongy's contributions for the evening, along with a post on the main page which may be found under the title "Shlongy' s Thanksgiving Recipe with Bonus Kitchen Camwhore!"... sorry don't want to sound petulant but this guy really sucks...
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-03-30 21:24:45 EDT (#)
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I cannot even fathom "ubering" from a pub.
You should sue yourself for apparently, having no friends.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-12-24 15:41:45 EST (#)
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REATLITORY -2's RULE!!!
How old are you Darth Famine? I'm gonna take a stab and say 15.
You MIGHT be 19 but with the maturity of a 15-year-old...and most likely, the penis size of a 9 year old.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-03-30 21:28:02 EDT (#)
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I thought you only write for that other "serious writers' forum"?
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-03-30 21:28:20 EDT (#)
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Leggo my eggo.
Submitted by dithered (user info) at 2008-03-31 10:37:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
So far what I've learned about the ups and downs of life is that YOU determine to what extent they affect your mood and outlook.
Humans are indeed in control of how they react to their environment.
Choose your attitude.
Submitted by Wildman (user info) at 2008-03-31 02:08:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
When life gives you a Bubba, all you can do is flush, wash your hands, and walk away.
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2008-03-31 00:56:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Weird how life jumps up from behind a bush and kicks your ass now and then. Of course, after a few instances of that happening you realize it's not wierd at all; it's normal. Then it'll happen one time and you'll say to yourself, "Normal how life jumps up from behind a bush and kicks your ass now and then." and you understand that it is, in fact, normal. Then you'll understand that one day someone will think that very thought because you're not in the pub/office/store anymore, and then you are faced with a choice concerning what to do with the focus of your days. Y'prolly don't know it now, but when you are faced with that choice you'll know what I mean.
Submitted by SPECIALk (user info) at 2008-03-31 00:40:51 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Unabonger (user info) at 2008-03-31 00:16:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
man up.
Submitted by X54 (user info) at 2008-03-30 23:17:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
It's impossible to write something that pleases everyone. It is possible to write something that displeases everyone. At least in my experience. Moping is counterproductive. I'd rather have my leg.
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2008-03-30 23:02:43 EDT (#)
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that's the spirit. fuck 'em
Submitted by zoobie2000 (user info) at 2008-03-30 22:46:23 EDT (#)
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thanks Ducky. I give up on this place anyway.
Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2008-03-30 22:31:55 EDT (#)
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That's standard. Don't take offense.
Submitted by zoobie2000 (user info) at 2008-03-30 22:31:10 EDT (#)
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here follows Shlongy's contributions for the evening, along with a post on the main page which may be found under the title "Shlongy' s Thanksgiving Recipe with Bonus Kitchen Camwhore!"... sorry don't want to sound petulant but this guy really sucks...
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-03-30 21:24:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I cannot even fathom "ubering" from a pub.
You should sue yourself for apparently, having no friends.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2007-12-24 15:41:45 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
REATLITORY -2's RULE!!!
How old are you Darth Famine? I'm gonna take a stab and say 15.
You MIGHT be 19 but with the maturity of a 15-year-old...and most likely, the penis size of a 9 year old.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-03-30 21:28:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I thought you only write for that other "serious writers' forum"?
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-03-30 21:28:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Leggo my eggo.
Submitted by zoobie2000 (user info) at 2008-03-30 22:20:25 EDT (#)
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Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-03-30 21:27:21 EDT (#)
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This is deep...like your asshole.
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What is this guy's problem?
Submitted by Ducky (user info) at 2008-03-30 22:16:53 EDT (#)
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It seems like you're trying to recapture a fragmented dream.
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2008-03-30 22:11:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
sometimes drugs are good. mmmkay?
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-03-30 21:29:10 EDT (#)
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Eurgh. Get over it or take up smack.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-03-30 21:27:21 EDT (#)
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This is deep...like your asshole.
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2008-03-30 21:01:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
not for nothing, but life sucks. without a little background there is no reason for me to care, and i need a reason if i'm not go to write this off as emo bullshit.
Submitted by Doodles (user info) at 2008-03-30 20:54:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2008-03-30 20:53:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment