NEW and IMPROVED and now with less epilepsy!!! Video CaMwHoRe (647 hits)
Category: Humor -> Dumb JobsRating: 1 on 17 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Uncle B. (View user info) at 2008-03-31 01:34:02 EDT
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c7XVW92PGhc
I screwed up my last bit but here it is freshly encoded...my latest piece of crap!!!
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Submitted by beer-turtle (user info) at 2008-04-03 13:57:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
HotWilly: Before you insult me, show me that you can do better, OR have a warm glass of Shut the Fuck Up.
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-04-02 18:44:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
you are one excruciating motherfucker
Submitted by beer-turtle (user info) at 2008-04-02 17:45:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
yes and that is why that one is getting kept.
the fedex bit is gone
Submitted by maiorano84 (user info) at 2008-04-02 13:41:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
The only bit you had that was actually funny was the Spanish bit.
VERY clever.
Submitted by beer-turtle (user info) at 2008-04-02 13:14:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Yeah I committed a cardinal sin of comedy, which was to present all new and untested material.
BUT:
Intro has been changed up again slightly to take advantage of whatever shirt I am wearing.
The Skydiving bit has been re-worked and punched up.
Intro to Call Center has been trimmed.
The Drunks on the phone has been trimmed and punched.
Fun with Latinos also trimmed but kept the best parts and added a line at the end.
Re-written the Stalker bit to be shorter and transition to the jobs bit.
I love video for this very reason. I can see everything I have done wrong, and then review and edit my bits to make them better.
Thanks for all the constructive critiques ya'll.
I know Sico's happy, now he doesn't have to read my weekly tales, now he can watch them.
Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2008-04-02 08:24:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You're presence was much better than the last time. Mix the material from the two and you are on to something. Work on trying to link the stories, be more relaxed about that.
Beer for you. I'm still very impressed you're doing this.
Submitted by polyamorousaj (user info) at 2008-03-31 15:24:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 in advance... I'll watch them both back-to-back when I get some time.
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2008-03-31 13:58:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Whoring=+2
Submitted by beer-turtle (user info) at 2008-03-31 13:45:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
My material was wordy and had way too much set up for too little punchline.
The videos help me improve my performance and get criticism.
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2008-03-31 13:11:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Fartman (user info) at 2008-03-31 12:51:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
That place should be called "For Cryin' Out Loud" when you uh, perform.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2008-03-31 11:17:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
better than your last go.
you seem more comfortable up there this time.
Submitted by Darth_Famine (user info) at 2008-03-31 09:42:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
not bad, not great but not bad
Submitted by beer-turtle (user info) at 2008-03-31 09:41:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
On the plus side I did buy a tripod and eliminated the seizure cam.
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-03-31 04:20:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I smiled a couple of times. More entertaining than your last one.
Submitted by ChristPuncher (user info) at 2008-03-31 03:59:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
If by kicked ass you mea...
ugh
go back to parking cars
GO BEARS WOO!!!
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2008-03-31 02:57:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
My sound isn't working at the moment - but I will trust you kicked ass.