Family Ties - Uberotica 2008 (Slightly NSFW) (1943 hits)
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Submitted by Orphelia (View user info) at 2008-04-09 05:20:58 EDT
Family Ties - Uberotica 2008 Submission
She watched as he chewed generous mouthfuls of food, slowly grinding it down to a pulp before swallowing it. Replacing it with another overloaded forkful of meat, he didn't even stop to look at what he was consuming. The man's vacant stare rested upon the television screen, the noise of some action film drowning out the sound of mastication.
Pippa sighed.
Her mind wandered to a time when they would dine together, an intimate twosome, sharing the food, enjoying easy flowing conversation. Being a couple. Now they were reduced to this. Dysfunctional, antisocial, dull old this.
Coiling her chestnut hair around her index finger, her gaze fell upon a photograph displayed on the console table. Tom had been so handsome in his youth, rugged features, a strong frame. She'd felt drawn to him the first instant they'd met, introduced by mutual friends at a pub gathering. It had taken Tom four hours to get Pippa into his bed. Remembering that night gave her a feeling of warmth and longing between her legs. She blushed.
Finishing his meal, the man wiped his mouth with the back of his hand and reached for the remote.
Collecting the dirty plate beside him, Pippa opened her mouth to say something but the words seemed to stick in her throat on exit. Pausing as she bent to retrieve the empty glass on the floor at his feet, Pippa surveyed Tom's once firm, sexy physique. The years had not passed unnoticed on him, his belly protruded proudly as a testament to his love of beer; his once smooth hands she would yearn to caress her body were now rough and dry, calloused with decades of work; his face was etched with deep lines, giving him a constant expression of sadness.
'Look at me', Pippa thought.
His stare did not shift.
Walking into the kitchen, the woman placed the crockery into the sink with a clatter of mild frustration.
As time had passed, their passion had slowly withered. Perhaps his more so. Of course, at the beginning, they never stopped, they were completely unable to keep their hands from each other. Excusing themselves at dinner parties for quick fumbles in the hosts bathroom; at work he'd phone her, distracted by the very thought of them together, she'd giggle as he whispered the things he would do to her when he got home that night.
There wasn't a single point things began to change, it was a stealthy gradient as they became more familiar.
Wistfully, she looked out of the kitchen window at the rain-soaked garden. Water dripped like tiny crystals from the worn wooden furniture. They had made love on that table. She had been working in the garden when he had returned home early from work one afternoon. They had kissed their hello's. Ah! They kissed all the time back then. He'd laid Pippa down on the table top and taken her there, both of them grinding together in unison, the sun beating down on their sweat sprinkled skin.
Finishing the last of the dishes, Pippa turned to see Tom standing in the doorway. Had he read her thoughts? They had been married so long now she believed, sometimes, they didn't need to express themselves with words.
"I am going to the pub" he stated, taking the car keys from the sideboard.
"Ok, see you later" Pippa replied, not moving.
The days when goodbyes were accompanied by a lingering kiss were long passed.
Hearing the engine start, she slowly climbed the stairs and flopped onto the bed.
'When had everything begun to rot so badly? 'She was only 38 for God's sake!' Pippa thought. 'Was she to live like this until she was dead?'
Closing her eyes, images flashed in Pippa's mind. His large hands tugging her hair playfully as they kissed, long and deep, tongues probing the others mouth; Tom's hand cupping the back of her delicate neck as he pulled her closer, her fingers running down his bare back...
On the bed, the woman's own hands mimicked the pictures inside her head. Her slender fingers ran through her hair, across her shoulders, her trim waist, to her breasts...
Tom would undress her slowly, taking in her perfect, milky smooth skin. With his finger, he would trace the outline of her shoulders, her collar bone, down to the soft, rounded mounds of her breasts. Circling their fullness, working towards the pink tipped centre where he would, gently at first, pinch Pippa's nipples with his thumb and index finger, feeling them swell and harden between his digits as his own cock became engorged with excitement...
Laying there alone, Pippa let her own hands explore herself, squeezing her now bare breasts, playfully teasing each of her nipples, placing each of them in turn to her mouth and circling the tip of her tongue around them hungrily. Fully aroused, she felt the warmth between her thighs return, only more intense than before. Raising her hips from the mattress, Pippa's hand stroked across her flat stomach as she peeled down her jeans and panties...
Tom let his finger stroke the smooth skin of his wife's pussy, gently parting her lips with a finger she had shuddered with anticipation. His finger slowly dipped into her pussy, he'd grown hard as he felt her wetness, taking her juices and spreading them over her clit. Pushing another finger inside her, she had gasped as he filled her tight hole, faster and harder he'd push them inside her.
Falling on the bed together, her parted her legs and let his tongue run from her knees, across her thighs. She bucked her hips, wanting his mouth to make full contact with her own swollen lips, but he'd always tease her a little, make her wait.
His tongue would lick her opening, pushing between her pussy lips, the tip of his tongue brushing her swollen clit, making her moan softly. Opening her wide, he'd press his tongue inside her, tasting her musky sweet juices, rocking his head back and forth in an ascending rhythm. She'd work her body with him as his mouth wandered over her clit, sucking it, ignoring her writhing knowing that it would give her pleasure...
Her own fingers entered her. Pippa felt her own building excitement, an energy within, mounting. Her body responded to every touch she made on herself. Groaning, she pushed another finger deep into her pussy, felt the internal heat, the tightening muscles gripping her in. Withdrawing her fingers to her mouth, she tasted herself, tasting what he would have tasted.
Pippa's hand spread her juice over her tingling clit, the sensation strong as she slowly stroked between her trembling legs, arching her back, grinding her hips...
Taking his hard cock in her hand, Pippa rubbed, letting the smooth skin slide beneath her fingers. Guiding him to her mouth, she began to flick her tongue over his red tip, slowly letting her mouth close around his girth, inch by inch filling her with his throbbing length.
Kneeling before him, making eye contact as she looked up, she moved his cock in and out, her pace quickening as he grabbed the back of her head and thrust deeper.
Her fingers stroked and caressed his balls, making him force more into her. As she sucked, she felt the wetness between her thighs spread, her pussy longing to be fucked...
Pippa's fingers slid inside herself with ease now, her pussy widening, she pushed more into herself, filling herself. Her other hand began to stroke her pink clit more frantically now; she felt her muscles begin to tense, closing her eyes she lifted her hips from the bed, moving her own hand further into her body, her breathing as rapid as her pounding heart, she bit her bottom lip...
Laying her on the bed, they watched as his cock slowly entered his wife, she gasped as he filled her, slowly grinding into her. She reached for his face, kissing hard as their bodies began to move together. Pippa felt him slide deeper inside her, heard the sound of her own juices saturating his cock and spreading to his groin. Pulling her closer to him, Tom gripped her body, using her to push himself harder.
Their writhing bodies tightly pressed together, every stroke seemed to make the feeling inside Pippa intensify. His pounding became more insistent, hastened, as she felt him grow inside her, her own muscles clenching around him, her spine curved as she lifted herself onto him.
Tom exploded inside her, his cock full and twitching, her own cum mixing with his...
She bucked her hips one final time as her fingers brought her to her orgasm, a flood of wetness gushed over her hand. Holding that pose for the duration of her ecstasy, she then collapsed back onto the bed in a satisfied heap. The woman's limp, naked body shined with perspiration.
Pippa's breathing slowed to normal as she lay there, still, her thighs wet with her own pleasure...
Sadness swept over her. Tom. He would be home soon. His breath stinking of stale ale, his hair rank with the stench of cigarette smoke. He would plonk himself in front of the TV where her would stay until he nodded off.
What if she were to remain here, wait for his return? Call him to the bedroom on arrival, let him see her naked body, smell the sex that hung in the air, see the crumpled sheets, the pillows tossed on the floor?
Would he be enticed? Would he be angry? To incite any kind of emotion would be a change.
Maybe, he would be overwhelmed by the urge to have her for himself, take her the way he had years before; after they had finished, he'd whisper 'I love you' before falling asleep holding her tight in his arms.
Maybe. Probably, he'd do nothing at all.
Deciding some things are best left unknown, Pippa rose from the bed, dressed herself, carefully arranged the bed to it's normal state and slowly descended the stairs...
User Reviews
Submitted by orph (user info) at 2008-05-02 04:05:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Toshi (user info) at 2008-04-28 08:43:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Surprisingly good.
This sort of thing doesn't happen in Northern Ireland.
Submitted by Glenn. (user info) at 2008-04-21 20:34:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Can we arrange some sort of "NSFTWHNYRTFAHW" tag, as in, Not Safe For Those Who Have Not Yet Resorted To Fantasies About House Wives?
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2008-04-11 14:50:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
WTF? Where was Michael J Fox in all of this? And where were Mallory and the blonde chick? And Michael J Fox's bespectacled friend?
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2008-04-11 14:22:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by DreamWeaver (user info) at 2008-04-11 13:22:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I have only just realised that people actually do that - search their handle in the search box thingy.
Hahaha 'ghastly'. Does that mean, while searching for yourself you first searched 'scourge', then 'ghastly', then 'beastly', then 'handsome' and then 'got sico banned'?
Tee hee.
I'd have to 'orphelia', then 'fat' (but may get lots of Bubba with that one - even though he is NOT fat) and then 'whore' and maybe throw in a 'dumb' as well.
Oooh this is a good game. I wonder if Banjo searches for comments made about her using the word 'douche'. 'Cos she'd be right! (Was I *that* annoying when I first started up?) :)
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i was poking fun at myself with the 'searching my name' comment. i just stumbled across that post and review because it was on mrr.
i don't remember when you first arrived here. i remember a lot of people piling on you about your camwhore. (you'll note that i wasn't one of them, ghastly though i may be.)
re: banjo, i can agree that she is a dipshit. but who on uber ISN'T?
Submitted by matnotharry (user info) at 2008-04-11 11:22:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Glad to be back : )
Began reading your post but got a little hot under the collar; I must be more Catholic than I thought : p
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2008-04-10 19:10:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
as i feverishly searched my name to see if i was an uber hot topic today i came across this:
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 12:29:32 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 purely for a few funny reviews I have seen made by yourself.
Reviews make Uber for me. That is why, despite him being ghastly, I am fond of scourge.
and i just have to say that i gave you this +2 just for calling me 'ghastly.' it certainly wasn't on the merits of the post. (which i did not read.)
Submitted by Charlton_H (user info) at 2008-04-09 17:55:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm stiff.
Then again, I'm dead.
Submitted by Caulfield (user info) at 2008-04-09 16:49:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-04-09 16:41:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
ahahaha
the hot parts were sad and the sad parts were...sad, too, actually
Submitted by MyTeeOne (user info) at 2008-04-09 16:39:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
The sad parts were very sad. The hot parts were very hot. Well done.
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-04-09 16:12:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
this really is hilarious
it's like bubba only with adults
Submitted by HellRazer (user info) at 2008-04-09 15:56:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Great story.
Submitted by SkullBiter (user info) at 2008-04-09 14:58:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 13:18:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I don't wanna be Mr Slave!
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You'd rather be Paris?
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-04-09 14:35:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
ok
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 14:34:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Take it outside, Willy.
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-04-09 14:33:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
and the horse1987 she rode in on
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-04-09 14:33:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
for mrs mccallum
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2008-04-09 14:32:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
To offset Jack's stalker.
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-04-09 14:30:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
trim waist?
more like trim waste.
Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2008-04-09 13:37:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
just read this again and got half a chubb again.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 13:26:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Oh, and thanks PBH and orph and KK
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 13:18:46 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I don't wanna be Mr Slave!
Submitted by SkullBiter (user info) at 2008-04-09 12:53:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Yep, its a whoreoff.
Like in southpark.
O = Mr slave.
Submitted by Socialist_Joe (user info) at 2008-04-09 12:23:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2008-04-09 11:47:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2008-04-09 11:24:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
A fantastic work of fiction. Of course we all know that as soon as a woman has a baby it destroys her interest in sex untill she reaches the menopause, so not that belivable, but certainly compelling.
It would have been better if it had been about Electro trying to control his 'tard hormones and resist raping his mum/middle aged care worker.
Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2008-04-09 11:22:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Orphy, check out the latest on the front page. Some lady is determind to be more of a uberwhore than you!
I think she has the game set and match. :P
Submitted by FALLEN (user info) at 2008-04-09 11:19:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
holy crap! Orphelia was depressed and killed herself and has been posting from the grave!!!
another depressing post, I thought your stories were suposed to give me a boner, not make me weep emo tears.
Well written though.
Submitted by orph (user info) at 2008-04-09 11:06:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Very good.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 11:04:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
FALLEN - both this post and below have elements of truth :(
http://www.ubersite.com/m/112696
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2008-04-09 10:54:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by FALLEN (user info) at 2008-04-09 10:52:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
This was depressing.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 10:39:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
You can post anything you like, as long as it is 'erotic'. As you can see, this word has been interpreted many different ways.
Deadline is midnight today (CST)
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-04-09 10:34:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 10:12:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I didn't make the brackets post, there was some confusion as to who had signed up but, yes, you are in it jack. It was an honest mistake
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Am I supposed to write something then? Someone needs to tell me these things!!
Submitted by Paralyzed_By_Hope (user info) at 2008-04-09 10:12:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Well done, my dear. Seriously. I really enjoyed this...and not in the pervy way. It was touching. (That sounds dirty.) Hell. It was beautifully written.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 10:12:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I didn't make the brackets post, there was some confusion as to who had signed up but, yes, you are in it jack. It was an honest mistake.
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-04-09 09:47:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-04-09 09:37:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Dude you are in it: http://www.ubersite.com/m/115995#2686283
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I wasn't in the counted categories. But whatever...fuck alll you!
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-04-09 09:37:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Dude you are in it: http://www.ubersite.com/m/115995#2686283
Submitted by Yozz (user info) at 2008-04-09 09:37:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No Comment
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-04-09 09:28:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Oh and btw I'm pretty sure I signed up for this, but I got snubbed and wasn't allowed to be a dirty perv!
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 09:19:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I feel very honoured mine is the only entry jack has bothered to rate. go me woo!
Thanks Sgt.H
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2008-04-09 09:13:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:53:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:43:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
yes you jack.
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If you want a gander dear just say so. *wink *wink
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:49:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I thought the sentence structuring worked really well as it fluctuated between what jack would consider 'grammatical' and a more wishy-washy style when it followed her line of thought.
When Pippa is thinking about her life and her husband the sentences are short and neat, but when she begins to fantasise her dream-like state make the sentences more bouncy, like this, like on a cloud, because she's dreaming, and relaxing, and fingering herself.
A bit of imagination and creativity regarding flow and sentence-structure suit this style of writing.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:43:43 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
yes you jack.
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:42:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:38:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
You said you would camwhore as an entry to Uberotica. You are up against steak.
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Please don't be me. I need at least a day to grow a 5 o'clock shadow. Btw Steak is a no-pube having chicken eater!
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:40:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:28:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks for your comments, whiskey_jack. I found the balance while describing it very hadr to achieve and the sentences are long as they are thoughts and also her movements.
I look forward to your entry.
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My advice is don't try to balance it. If it's too much in a open sight then it should go. You have great form, but I'd work on our strucure, letting dickholes in, and don'r forget good D wins games...plus you have pretty eyes!
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:38:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
You said you would camwhore as an entry to Uberotica. You are up against steak.
Submitted by lostnphound (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:35:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
my bad...
"BOING"
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:34:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Wait...my what? I was just giving some random crap as adivce. I've been in a Creative Writing course too long, have to workshop some shite. So you're a breath of fresh air. My main advice would be, that you pick a POV. Who's the story about? Or who's the story showing? Basically I like your characters and your style but I would say it needs to more, impessive a certain character.
Submitted by lostnphound (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:34:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:31:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
outstanding dear, color me impressed.
and now you can color me randy!
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:28:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
*hard lol
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:28:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks for your comments, whiskey_jack. I found the balance while describing it very hadr to achieve and the sentences are long as they are thoughts and also her movements.
I look forward to your entry.
Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:24:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Pisshead below :)
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:22:58 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No offense but in countless places where you use a comma you should just end a sentence, and end with a period. But if it makes you feel better I'm very cute.
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-04-09 08:14:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
It was pretty good. I liked it in general, and the overall structure. Howvere it'd be a great, great story if you leave more mystery in the desrciption. I'd ironically like you to be more metaphorical in your actions please.
Submitted by c1ndy (user info) at 2008-04-09 07:49:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by creep_firebombing (user info) at 2008-04-09 07:45:30 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2008-04-09 07:08:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
try using "B&W" as one of your search terms. most porn is in color.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 07:06:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thank you to FJ for supplying the picture.
I searched images under 'Woman seductive on bed' I suggest you do not do this. The filename is mine.
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-04-09 06:55:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
The picture works really well with this story ;)
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2008-04-09 06:53:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
pippa is a good name.
Submitted by Nellypaal (user info) at 2008-04-09 06:51:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
And I thought you brought as much substance to this site as I do. Nice.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 06:24:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Old boy? :(
Submitted by sexualchocolate1984 (user info) at 2008-04-09 06:09:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Now that is uberotica!
Beautiful, ironic, filthy, appeasing.
Jolly good show old boy.
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-04-09 05:59:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by darko (user info) at 2008-04-09 05:56:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
not gonna read it
Submitted by pen_name (user info) at 2008-04-09 05:55:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i'm tired and don't want to sleep with an erection so i'll bestow an honorary 2
Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2008-04-09 05:46:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Brilliant. I think this is the best thing you have ever written!
Orphy FTW
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-04-09 05:24:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Touching.
As in, it touched me with its sadness and then I touched myself to the smut.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-04-09 05:21:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
http://www.ubersite.com/m/115995