Claire's Terror (626 hits)
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Submitted by SkullBitingPassesTime (View user info) at 2008-04-11 13:04:42 EDT
http://www.ubersite.com/m/116077 Sam's Choice
"The lake"? Claire froze. She could'nt tell how angry he really was. Then again, she never could. Sam was a quiet guarded man she had met through her network of friends. He'd been so sweet, saying clever things to make her laugh. They used to laugh, she remembered that too. That was years ago, their passions for each other had burned hotter then. Could a romantic get away be just what they need? To rekindle the fires? God knows they had problems, but what couple didnt?
You fucked his best friend Jeremy, remember? You can't just make that go away.
"Sure Sam, lets go". The idea of going to the lake, hours after telling her husband of her infidelity made Claire anxious. Dismissing the uneasy feeling in her stomach, she flashed her best come get me grin towards her lover. Maybe a little hot and steamy was just what they needed, away from everything, and everyone. Most of all, she needed to get away from Jeremy. He seemed to hang in the house, a malignant shroud just out of sight. Waiting.
No matter what happens it can't be as horrible as telling him. Oh, god. He had been so livid then, face ingulfed in anger and betrayal.
Claire woke up, confused. Her head hurt, she knew that for certain. She felt sickly, her mouth dry. Her tongue probed something shoved into her mouth. A gag? Course ropes held her hands tied into an impossible knot. She could hear the lake, gently lapping away at the shore. The damp smell of decaying wood told her she was near the dock.
The dock.
Why is it so dark? Don't panick, think. Damn it Claire think
She was standing in the den, facing the roaring fireplace... Then, pain. Blinding white, hot. Coursed through her veins, and up into the manifested spot on the back of her skull. Sam, standing...
Sam did this. Sam. Oh god Sam why. WHY SAM. Her husband, lover and mother to their only child. This had to be dream, right? she struggled to open her eyes, slightly shaking to gain her bearings.
She looked up, and was met with a look she had never seen before. Contempt, from Sam. He was looking down on her, as if she was nothing. Just a insignificant speck, a tarnish. She held his gaze, hoping somehow she could quell the monster within her husband. He suddenly stood, removing the gag. She would have said something, but he interrupted her.
"Shhhh now ya' hear". Sam smiled, looking down at her. "Shh, you're going to learn a very important lesson today".
Lesson? Oh, fuck. Jeremy. She knew that was it. He was going to punish her for fucking around. She would make it through this, and when she did. She'd leave the fucker.
She began to cry, large salty drops falling on to the dock. She raised her face again to her husbands, meeting his gaze.
"Why Sam, why?"
"Jeremy Bates"
Her heart sunk, so this was it. She'd be fish food by the morning. So much for love. The Beatles had lied to her.
Sam picked Claire up, and started to the end of the dock. Fear flooded her body, her heart rate racing. Then standing at the edge of a dock, he threw her.
SAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAM!
She hit the water, sinking down. Spitting out water, she inhaled some choking on it. Writhing hard, she attempted to escape her bonds, with no avail. The knots tied too tight, she was losing strength as it was. As her vision fogged, her final thought floated through her mind, like a corpse.
An eye for an eye, Sam. An eye for an eye.
User Reviews
Submitted by ruthless (user info) at 2008-05-15 14:35:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I hate the name Claire.
Submitted by theBarron (user info) at 2008-04-26 21:28:27 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Cool.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2008-04-14 19:20:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
2
Submitted by spyder882001 (user info) at 2008-04-14 19:18:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
damn good
Submitted by Lib (user info) at 2008-04-14 13:05:17 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2008-04-14 08:49:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2008-04-11 12:57:44 CDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I read right over the part about Sam being the mother. If you have the time, it's always a good idea to let someone else proofread your stuff. Not me, obviously.
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2008-04-12 04:30:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Auto married bliss +2
Submitted by loan_officer (user info) at 2008-04-12 02:27:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by SkullBiter (user info) at 2008-04-11 18:46:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Hmm, i've already wrote the next part.
Jeremy's Revenge.
Then one more after that, and I'm done with it.
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2008-04-11 17:19:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2008-04-11 15:38:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by sideshow (user info) at 2008-04-11 15:01:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Excellent story!
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2008-04-11 14:28:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
gorgeous pic
Submitted by SkullBiter (user info) at 2008-04-11 14:02:19 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Its my mistake for botching any Beatles references.
I never really listened to them, sure I've heard them.
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2008-04-11 13:57:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I read right over the part about Sam being the mother. If you have the time, it's always a good idea to let someone else proofread your stuff. Not me, obviously.
PS: You fucked up the file name on the picture. You mention the Beatles and use the word love four times instead of three. Picky fucker, ain't I?
Great writing.
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2008-04-11 13:45:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I liked it, but then I hate cuckolding whores.
Submitted by SkullBiter (user info) at 2008-04-11 13:24:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Don't you watch Ophera?
Thanks. Damn it.
Submitted by moneyshotforyou (user info) at 2008-04-11 13:22:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Good stuff except for Sam being the mother of their child.