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Submitted by Tesla (View user info) at 2008-04-25 04:42:32 EDT
I'm posting another song from my CD to get some feedback and what not.
I have a lot of songs so it's a little hard to chose one for critiquing...
This one is Broken Umbrella.
It is an indie album and a lot of the songs are unconventional but give a listen...
let me know what you think.
broken umbrella.mp3 (1 MB) [audio/mpeg]
User Reviews
Submitted by stinkfish (user info) at 2008-04-26 02:02:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
thanks
Submitted by spyder882001 (user info) at 2008-04-25 22:31:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
get better recording equipment
your voice sux
guitar was good
Submitted by TheUniter (user info) at 2008-04-25 20:58:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by stinkfish (user info) at 2008-04-25 18:55:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Thanks for the insights...
not so fast Berty.
Submitted by rorrim (user info) at 2008-04-25 11:42:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Sounds like victorian age techno. I like the techno part.
also :
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2008-04-25 10:54:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Don't forget about UBERFM.
Additional +1 for balls.
Submitted by CaptainThorns (user info) at 2008-04-25 11:25:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Good idea, but needs more "umph" - try adding some bass and drum tracks.
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2008-04-25 11:18:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2008-04-25 08:20:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2008-04-25 07:58:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2008-04-25 06:33:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Berty is an angry young man who feels that the world is against him.
In other news this wasn't terrible.
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Beano steals from the government which means that he is stealing from EVERYONE.
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Hey Berty, how about the good old Bank of England helping out our greedy cash sucking banks in their recent credit crisis... which I hasten to add THEY FUCKING CREATED... Nice, bail them out with OUR FUCKING MONEY.
CUNTS.
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Your rant fails to even remotely excuse your spongy status.
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2008-04-25 10:54:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Don't forget about UBERFM.
Submitted by Glenn. (user info) at 2008-04-25 09:19:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
+2 for encouragement, -1 for what I just listened to. Just promise me you won't stake your entire future on your music career and we're cool.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2008-04-25 08:20:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2008-04-25 07:58:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2008-04-25 06:33:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Berty is an angry young man who feels that the world is against him.
In other news this wasn't terrible.
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Beano steals from the government which means that he is stealing from EVERYONE.
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Hey Berty, how about the good old Bank of England helping out our greedy cash sucking banks in their recent credit crisis... which I hasten to add THEY FUCKING CREATED... Nice, bail them out with OUR FUCKING MONEY.
CUNTS.
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2008-04-25 07:58:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2008-04-25 06:33:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Berty is an angry young man who feels that the world is against him.
In other news this wasn't terrible.
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Beano steals from the government which means that he is stealing from EVERYONE.
Submitted by theBarron (user info) at 2008-04-25 07:01:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
I PREFER THE SWEET MUSIC OF BURNING BABIES.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2008-04-25 06:33:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Berty is an angry young man who feels that the world is against him.
In other news this wasn't terrible.
Submitted by littledan (user info) at 2008-04-25 04:59:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
It was pretty good, the lyrics were interesting, good on you for posting.
SHAMELESS LINKWHORE to my music:
http://www.ubersite.com/m/87016
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2008-04-25 04:57:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Music is awful. The only thing that is worse than music is secret music that neither I nor anyone else who isn't a benefit scrounger or publically financed layabout can listen to.
RACISM!
Submitted by DrogoRoch (user info) at 2008-04-25 04:51:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I really liked the intro and the end. My problem was with the vocals really, they just didnt seem to flow with the music and seemed almost supper imposed on it for the sake of having something else there. I dont know all that much about music so I wouldnt take what I say too much to heart, like you would anyway.
Still not bad and much better than anything I could do.
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-04-25 04:46:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Not my kind of thing at all, but sounds pretty cool.