Self Portrait (beware it's poetry) (421 hits)
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Submitted by whiskeyjack (View user info) at 2008-05-07 06:20:49 EDT
Mirroring a Wooden Melody
Seeing through colors of stormy skies
a forest rich in amusement.
Thrusting up from a the absurdity of the serious,
eccentricity barks out at the mundane.
A melancholy dance to his own horn,
trampling through worldly pace.
Ever growing up and forward,
passionately remembering old roots.
Another fast smirk sets the next horn's blow,
for another charge on cliche.
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Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:50:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
it's actually getting close what do you know
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:49:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
nope this truly sucks no one can help you now boy
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:49:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
maybe not
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:48:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i think its a lost cause dude
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:47:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i need a spotter this pos is fucking heavy
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:46:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
closer
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:46:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
almost there
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:46:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
seriously it really is
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:45:31 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
this is front page material definitely
Submitted by HotWillie (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:41:14 EDT (#)
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Mirroring a Wooden Melody
Seeing through colors of stormy skies
a forest rich in amusement.
Thrusting up from a the absurdity of the serious,
eccentricity barks out at the mundane.
A melancholy dance to his own horn,
trampling through worldly pace.
Ever growing up and forward,
passionately remembering old roots.
Another fast smirk sets the next horn's blow,
for another charge on cliche.
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mirroring my morning woody
watching my penis through bleary eyes
a woody for my amusement
thrusting up through my fist the head looks so serious
the main vein strains past the mundane
a melancholy groan from my tiny horn
engorging my sweaty face
ever growing up and forward
passionately fondling my root
another fast squirt almost reaches my tongue
another precious snowflake lost
time for school
sorry bud i added a line to make the climax a little sweeter and in your case realistic
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2008-05-07 10:23:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Are you 15? Is this the early 90s?
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2008-05-07 09:18:29 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2008-05-07 09:10:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
total cock-end pre-pubesent tripe
Submitted by Ltap (user info) at 2008-05-07 09:07:28 EDT (#)
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Cliched.
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-05-07 07:11:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Shite.
Submitted by orph (user info) at 2008-05-07 06:56:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
I do like Torres.
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-05-07 06:55:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
When a poem doesn't rhyme
Its a great disgraceful crime
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-05-07 06:38:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Fuck you, Torres is footie Jesus!