The Day wasTuesday (265 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: -1.8 on 14 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by John Wayne on Acid <wrekkstylz.at.gmail.com> (View user info) at 2008-05-08 04:57:37 EDT
Back in '98 the day was Tuesday, the sun was setting but it was a warm day. It was a perfect day for swimming; just the right amount of clouds, and a perfect dark blue sky bordered by a deep orange hue along the horizon. I went outside into the backyard. I could see the silhouette of other houses and the trees in the distance. The breeze blew in the smell of a cookout from the distance--Mmmm, mesquite.
I walked to the pool and slowly made my way into the water: the water was light and warm. I was lying on top of a [Texas Recreations®] Sunray pool float (made of foam material) looking up at the sky for about an hour. I watched as the sky grew darker and the stars became faintly visible. I was getting lost in my own thoughts, forgetting about everything and drowning upwards into the vastness of the sky, space, and the universe.
The sound of the back door sliding open brought me back to reality (slightly). It was my sister. I thought to myself, "Great, here comes queen bitch to ruin this perfect evening for me." She didn't say a word as she made her way to the pool. She was looking good. It's strange that I thought that. We started talking; a little bit fake at first but it got better and more interesting as time went on. It was a nice change: we're usually fighting and saying really mean things to each other. Today was different though; we actually managed to engage in pleasant conversation. I was thinking of her a little different that day. She was beautiful. She was sweet.
We were in the pool. I could detect the faint smell of jasmine from the shampoo she used. It perfumed the air around us and added to the quiet pleasant atmosphere. We became giddy and playful with each other. I was in complete ecstasy and then the phone rang. I got out of the pool to go answer the phone but when I did, my swimming trunks slid down exposing me. My sister looked up and saw that I had a an erection. I pulled my trunks up as fast as I could and went to answer the phone, but whoever it was had hung up--maybe it was my conscience calling.
I changed into some jeans and a t-shirt and went back outside pretending like nothing had happened. My sister was out of the pool and drying off with a towel when I went back out. We came inside and went on about our business. She acted non-chalant about what had happened for the remainder of the day.
At night, as I was lying on the love-seat sofa watching an episode of the Twilight Zone, my sister came up to me and kissed me on the lips. At first just a regular innocent kiss but then more passionately. My lips were pressed against hers; our mouths slightly opened. We kissed slowly. I held her close to me and tilted her head slightly back. We stayed like that for some time: kissing, holding, touching, feeling.
A loud commercial came on and broke the mood. We both became aware that what we were doing was wrong; immoral at least. We sat up and she said, "I had really great time with you today." Then she gave me a hug before walking up stairs to her room. I whispered in her ear, "I love you," but I don't know if she heard me.
11:59 P.M.: The day was Tuesday. I laid there on the couch with the lights off watching television with the volume low, wondering about the day, drifting deep into my thoughts again and drifting into--the twilight zone.
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Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-05-08 12:35:15 EDT (#)
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...The Copacabannnnnnnnnnn-aaaaaaaaa
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2008-05-08 11:57:58 EDT (#)
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Mmm... incest.
Submitted by John_Wayne_on_Acid (user info) at 2008-05-08 11:33:11 EDT (#)
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Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2008-05-08 09:25:34 EDT (#)
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wrekstylz, mah nigga! Wazzup, G-BOT!
QUE?
Submitted by moneyshotforyou (user info) at 2008-05-08 10:25:28 EDT (#)
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Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-05-08 09:46:18 EDT (#)
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fart
Submitted by lostnphound (user info) at 2008-05-08 09:36:41 EDT (#)
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STOP!
Submitted by theBarron (user info) at 2008-05-08 09:34:02 EDT (#)
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FUCK YOU!
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2008-05-08 09:25:34 EDT (#)
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wrekstylz, mah nigga! Wazzup, G-BOT!
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-05-08 07:57:24 EDT (#)
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Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-05-08 07:53:34 EDT (#)
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Nice to see this gem back.
Submitted by MudWhistle (user info) at 2008-05-08 07:47:30 EDT (#)
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the sun was beatin' down on my baseball hat
the air was gettin' cold
the beer was gettin' flat
Submitted by John_Wayne_on_Acid (user info) at 2008-05-08 05:17:41 EDT (#)
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i had indented but it didn't come out that way. sorry. it's my first post.
Submitted by Beano312003 (user info) at 2008-05-08 05:17:23 EDT (#)
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It was a perfect day for swimming; just the right amount of clouds,
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I beg your pardon?
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-05-08 04:58:08 EDT (#)
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Giant block of text FTW!