Just Another Day (619 hits)
Category: SportsRating: -1 on 11 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Lib (View user info) at 2008-05-29 20:36:29 EDT
My god she is so sick of everything at the moment.
She sits at her desk wondering for the hundredth time if any thing would EVER go her way. It happened again today. One foot up, seven under.
Or is that six feet under.
That is maybe wiser choice. What's really wrong with suicide anyhow? Yeah, yeah god hates people the commit suicide, but since she don't bother him much he doesn't bother her.
Ok, ok now she has decided death is the way to go. How to do it is now the problem. She thinks she has the answer; she can smoke herself to death.
Oh no that won't work she has been smoking since she was 13
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Guns yes guns can kill. No never mind she knows nothing about guns.
Rope, hanging is a good death. Sure your tongue sticks out and get a bit blue but hey she will be dead who cares. She searches all over for some kind of rope, cord anything. Dam no rope.
Hmm one story house no jumping and dying there. Oh finally she thinks stabbing or cutting. She has knives galore. Grabbing up a knife she runs it across her wrist. WTF
Oh that's right she meant to go get those sharpened last week. Shit Shit shit.
She can't even kill herself right.
She decides to go into town and buy some razor blades or rope, something! GODAMMIT she should be able to do this one thing right.
She gets in her rusty ol' Toyota cranks it up, that is the last thing she knows.
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Submitted by Lib (user info) at 2008-05-30 11:57:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
opps
Submitted by Lib (user info) at 2008-05-30 11:56:42 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
God this sucks
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-05-30 05:18:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
You are lovely. This post leaves a little to be desired though :(
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-05-30 05:02:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Dire.
Submitted by centaur (user info) at 2008-05-30 04:20:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
LOL
Spelling*
Submitted by centaur (user info) at 2008-05-30 04:19:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Lib, I don't want you thinking that people are just -2'ing this offhand.
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She sits at her desk wondering for the hundredth time if any thing would EVER go her way. It happened again today. One foot up, seven under.
Or is that six feet under.
That is maybe wiser choice. What's really wrong with suicide anyhow? Yeah, yeah god hates people the commit suicide, but since she don't bother him much he doesn't bother her.
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Submitted by orph (user info) at 2008-05-30 03:55:04 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No Comment
Submitted by potatomanjack (user info) at 2008-05-30 03:10:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Drink crushed glass
Submitted by bob (user info) at 2008-05-30 00:07:28 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I was so ready for the Limp Bizkit lyrics.
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-05-29 22:18:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
OH
EM
GEE
Submitted by comicbookguy (user info) at 2008-05-29 21:41:03 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
dam no rope