experiment (851 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 1.7 on 30 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by NUW (View user info) at 2008-06-05 05:39:50 EDT
this is a short screenplay pasted into a long jpeg to preserve proper formatting
hope someone likes it
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Submitted by kristy (user info) at 2008-06-09 17:34:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by HurtByTheSun (user info) at 2008-06-06 04:17:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Welcome to Uber, I didn't read all of this because the font is so spidery my eyes started to bleed.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2008-06-05 23:40:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
"She stares at him, growling."
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2008-06-05 22:08:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-06-05 15:54:07 BST (#)
Ranking: -2
I'm not waiting around for this shit to load.
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:D
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2008-06-05 21:08:08 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Well done but been done waaaaay to much.
Submitted by oapa (user info) at 2008-06-05 18:06:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Very Enjoyable. :)
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2008-06-05 17:17:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 BECAUSE OFFICE SPACE IS ON.
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2008-06-05 15:39:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
www.myfreecopyright.com
But seriously, this was a good story.
I just hate the vampire genre right now. Passionately.
Submitted by centaur (user info) at 2008-06-05 15:18:40 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Director (user info) at 2008-06-05 15:04:09 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
+2 vampires, bait and switcheroo, romeo & juliet, complete and utter originality, dark woods and cabins, writers block, dead wife, horrible, horrible, horrible sadness, agonizing mistakes, etc., etc., etc.
I've never read anything like that before, ever.
Except I think on All My Children.
Submitted by GangsterSquid (user info) at 2008-06-05 13:14:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I actually read this. Very good.
Submitted by Lib (user info) at 2008-06-05 13:13:36 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2008-06-05 12:06:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
you are a good writer
and i did know
you looked deep inside yourself
love the title
love your suit
Submitted by czwij (user info) at 2008-06-05 11:24:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
how bout vam-pie-urs, then?
could you?
would you?
read a story about vam pie urs
in a box, with a fox
on a train, in a plane?
Submitted by shadow (user info) at 2008-06-05 11:17:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
I'm sure this is rather good, unique, original, all that shit. I'm sure you've done something with vampires that I've never seen before. I'm sure you've put a ton of effort into it. This is why I'm sticking you with a plus 2.
However...
I am so goddamn sick and tired of vampires or Vampyres or however the hell the downtrodden emo cutters of the world today are spelling it. I don't want to see a vampire movie, hear a sunlight induced shriek, or listen to the mournful lamentations of a black veiled whiner cried out over Bauhaus's last album. I really can't express to you how overdone and BORING the entire vampire genre is now. It's awful, painful even. And vampires just aren't that cool in the first place.
I would REALLY appreciate it if you could dedicate your writing ability to an original setup and theme, that would be super. Do me a solid, and leave the vampire bullshit to Anne Rice and her horde of tearful readers.
Submitted by czwij (user info) at 2008-06-05 11:12:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
moral of the story;
don't fuck with your food, young lady
good stuff
Submitted by FALLEN (user info) at 2008-06-05 11:01:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
bravo
Submitted by Orgasmatron (user info) at 2008-06-05 10:57:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Sure.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-06-05 10:54:07 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I'm not waiting around for this shit to load.
Submitted by Yozz (user info) at 2008-06-05 10:18:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2008-06-05 08:49:49 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
romeo and juliette, the vampire years?
Submitted by LittleMonster (user info) at 2008-06-05 07:49:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Holy shit!
Submitted by ICO (user info) at 2008-06-05 07:30:54 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by orph (user info) at 2008-06-05 06:54:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Fantastic.
Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2008-06-05 06:51:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2008-06-05 06:50:23 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Oh I get it... she was a FEMINIST!
Submitted by sexualchocolate1984 (user info) at 2008-06-05 06:38:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Kicker of all ass indeed! - Fucking A.
Submitted by Nellypaal (user info) at 2008-06-05 06:05:01 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Nice. Really enjoyed it.
Submitted by jared.melton (user info) at 2008-06-05 06:01:44 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Pretty frakkin' good.
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-06-05 05:54:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Pretty damn cool. Shameless linkwhore:
http://www.ubersite.com/m/116067