Notice of Foreclosure (543 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.33 on 6 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by puck (View user info) at 2008-10-20 13:53:30 EDT
she said i stole her heart but i had only lost the key
and inside her eyes i saw forever burning just for me.
well, midnight is an evil dame and she'll steal it all away
and wandering the empty streets i have nothing left to say.
i'll pack up things and buy a map and point my body west,
head into the sunset like all the cowboys who knew best,
disappear without a trace and be gone like all bad dreams,
and hope that all this rambling will give birth to better things.
isabel was a gambling gal and she was born under the sun,
whispered to me the sweetest things ever said by anyone,
and i long for the mountains while my love longs for the sands;
is God playing me like Job and just hiding away his hands?
i hope that when i wake up and face another morning blues
perhaps my whole life story will have been the evening news
where the weatherman predicted rain and said to wear a coat
but as always i had shut the door before i heard that note.
User Reviews
Submitted by Spam (user info) at 2008-10-21 20:35:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Harriet. Harry-ette. Hard-hearted harbinger of haggis. Beautiful, bemuse-ed, bellicose butcher. Un-trust... ing. Un-know... ing. Un-love... ed? "He wants you back," he screamed into the night air like a fireman going to a window that has no fire... except the passion of his heart. I am lonely. It's really hard. This poem... sucks.
Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2008-10-20 21:56:39 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
i'd like to foreclose on your, no doubt acne ridden, face.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-10-20 14:45:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
I wish they'd foreclose on your account.
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2008-10-20 14:27:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by sage104 (user info) at 2008-10-20 14:22:18 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Liked it lots.
Points!!
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2008-10-20 14:07:22 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
In your dimension, are only fictional characters important enough to have their names capitalized?