Beautiful (901 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 0.61 on 19 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by Technoratty (View user info) at 2008-12-14 18:17:00 EST
Beautiful
Just a beautiful, pale, redheaded girl
sitting quietly in the shadows, in the hazy darkness, in the smoke
beautiful ........
young,demure, soft, firm, intelligent, articulate, pure, head bowed, eyes down
just ...... beautiful...... except for the bruises on her cheeks
the bruises on her neck, back, stomach, legs, sides, arms
She needed to know she was beautiful, so she asked, "Would you fuck me?" I thought it was a come-on.
Her man is not far away, he is laughing , he is drinking too much, he is smoking crack, he is looking at other women, he is groping, kissing flirting with other women.
She needed to know that her company was desired so she asked, "If I died tomorrow, would you miss me?" and I answered, "Don't say things like that!!." Even if it wasn't an answer to the question.
a desperately beautiful girl
but her man hates her, hits her, because she is too fat too skinny too ugly too slutty too stupid too smart-fucking mouthed, too quiet, too loud ,too easy, too hard-to-get
dragging her, bloody, to the bedroom where it's hard, hard for him, hard for him to get it up
but.. he is a 'Good Man' because he says so..
even when he yells, he is a 'Good man', when he says nothing
when he comes home late
late, too late, smelling like perfume, smelling like cum
when he tells her, 'i love you,' and doesn't mean it
when he tells her, 'stupid cock-sucking bitch,'
She needed to know that she was in control, and that what happened before would never happen again. So she gave every guy in a the room a lap dance.
"What a fuckin' whore," the other girls said.
she could have been someone, something, somewhere at some time
but now?
she is broken and beautiful...
"I need you to believe". She whispered, to the darkness, to me, to herself. "I need you to tell me I'm beautiful". She bit her lip, and forced herself to say it out loud.
User Reviews
Submitted by Rob23 (user info) at 2008-12-15 20:56:22 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
Suck.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2008-12-15 10:45:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
this wasn't written very well
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2008-12-15 09:05:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2008-12-15 06:07:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Alright, I'm calling this mad infatuation with redheads out once and for all.
What is with it? Why are so many people retarded for red hair? It doesn't make any sense!
Is it because of Scarlet Johannsen?
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Johannsen is the newer generation's Molly Ringwald. Who is my generation's Elizabeth I. There's also Julianne Moore, Gillian Anderson and Dana Delaney. What I'd like to know is why you Brits are so intimidated by gingers. See:
http://www.austin360.com/movies/content/movies/stories/2007/08/0812redhead.html
http://abcnews.go.com/GMA/story?id=3378972
I suppose it's an innate fear of Irish uprisings coupled with an aversion to any social diversity that could, in the long term, take care of your abhorrent dental issues.
Submitted by mystiamoon (user info) at 2008-12-15 07:22:04 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Just a beautiful, pale, auburn headed girl
sitting quietly in the shadows, in the hazy darkness,
beautiful ........
demure, soft, firm, intelligent, articulate,
hey that's me!
:D
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2008-12-15 06:15:32 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I think I have seen you on Waterloo Street. Are you a hooker?
Submitted by Berty (user info) at 2008-12-15 06:07:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Alright, I'm calling this mad infatuation with redheads out once and for all.
What is with it? Why are so many people retarded for red hair? It doesn't make any sense!
Is it because of Scarlet Johannsen?
Submitted by RoadSong (user info) at 2008-12-15 03:52:08 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Like it...
Submitted by coley (user info) at 2008-12-15 03:38:24 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
not bad, but lapdances and cracksmoking =/=pure... :S
Submitted by shitfuck (user info) at 2008-12-15 01:12:14 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
I'm sure you're awesome, this just isn't awesome writing. At all.
Kinda lame-0.
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2008-12-15 00:32:26 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2008-12-14 23:59:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2008-12-14 21:54:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-12-14 21:37:53 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Submitted by sandmantate (user info) at 2008-12-14 19:15:57 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Good stuff.
Submitted by icarus1987 (user info) at 2008-12-14 18:46:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
OR make sure Bob meets with a horrible "accident". Like horribly cutting off his own buttocks whilst shaving.
Submitted by SilvrWolf (user info) at 2008-12-14 18:42:53 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Hauntingly well executed
Submitted by Banjo (user info) at 2008-12-14 18:35:07 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I don't understand it either... It's horrid when it's one of your friends or your family though.
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2008-12-14 18:32:05 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I will never understand women who stay with men who treat them like shit. If you're at the point where you're telling your friends "If something happens to me, it was probably Bob." then you should realize before you've finished saying the sentence that it is time to pack your shit and fucking leave Bob.
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2008-12-14 18:29:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
pretty good