over and over, again and again (1897 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 1.43 on 33 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by experima (View user info) at 2008-12-30 03:23:59 EST
At the beach, where you
played your guitar and sang to me;
legs bristly against my arms, as I sank
backwards into your warmth.
Your arms closed around me, as
I looked into your face, upside down.
Done it so many times.
Over and over again and again,
and your kiss fell on my
forehead, just like it always does.
Your brown eyes
softened into my green.
Sandpipers,
long beaked
poking holes in the surf
finding tiny things.
I wonder how they can see things that aren't there.
They run from the tide as it rushes
in, but they always
go right back.
Over and over.
They return,
again and again.
Because they know what they want.
Boys In the water,
brown boys with wet brown shorts.
They look naked when they play.
Kurt sings to me, and I'm
watching black dolphins,
two of them,
their backs arching
as they dive under again.
My back arches
when I think of you.
Each crash
making noise in my head, my ears;
and in a flash, your lips hit mine again
full, hard, fast
fall back into the sand,
joy tears welling
made of the same stuff
as the waves before me.
And I wiped my eyes;
And I smiled and
thought
I love you too
I love you too
I love you too
I'm so lucky to have you
because I remembered you
are mine
and you always
were.
User Reviews
Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2009-01-10 21:12:37 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
your a sweetie-pie
Submitted by diavola (user info) at 2009-01-06 01:31:35 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
i hope the person you wrote this for appreciates it
Submitted by diavola (user info) at 2009-01-06 01:25:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
you must really love him
Submitted by cheerios (user info) at 2008-12-31 22:44:10 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
yawn
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2008-12-31 15:22:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2008-12-30 13:51:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This poem is better than mine.
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Just like everything else.
Wildman, if you are really that old, I know who you are.
Submitted by maiorano84 (user info) at 2008-12-31 15:02:02 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
When I have a boner that won't go down, I'll remember to read this.
Submitted by RoadSong (user info) at 2008-12-31 03:56:22 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
mmmmmm foam.
Submitted by Wildman (user info) at 2008-12-30 21:21:00 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
for you got
walk
personality
talk
personality
smile
personality
charm
personality
love
personality
and of course you got a great big
har-r-art
L Price
Submitted by w_t_a_y_s_t_r_m (user info) at 2008-12-30 19:12:51 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-12-30 16:43:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Is it odd I that when I wrote both very random and drunk ratings earlier I kept hearing them being said in the voice of John Travolta?
Submitted by ColchesterDr (user info) at 2008-12-30 16:04:45 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
meh
Submitted by JoeyG (user info) at 2008-12-30 14:54:47 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Howdy Ho!
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2008-12-30 13:54:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Jeanneee (user info) at 2008-12-30 13:51:36 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
This poem is better than mine.
Submitted by sage104 (user info) at 2008-12-30 13:47:40 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Thanks (?) EI...
Submitted by SilvrWolf (user info) at 2008-12-30 13:45:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2008-12-30 13:42:11 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
lol angel below
Submitted by sage104 (user info) at 2008-12-30 13:38:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Because I dont retal or rate the poster.
Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2008-12-30 13:17:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
like a monkey with a miniature cymbal, over and over and over and over
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kHB9F8tvGVM
Submitted by sandmantate (user info) at 2008-12-30 13:03:14 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Fucking poetry.
Submitted by no1hasdis (user info) at 2008-12-30 12:44:41 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 experima
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2008-12-30 12:39:29 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
nubs
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2008-12-30 11:27:23 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Hope you're happy.
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-12-30 09:05:54 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
I hope you smell like pineapples...
If this is a problem I don't want to be a eraser.
Cause those are used to get rid of stuff and I want my stuff.
...a lot
Submitted by whiskey_jack (user info) at 2008-12-30 09:03:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Seriously I would totally have sex with you.
... maybe even twice.
,,,whats having your world rocked twice? Fucked to the power of? Fucked cubed? I hate math but love your boobs and the math that obviously makes your hand wish it was in my pants.
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2008-12-30 08:01:12 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Is this about Shlongy...again?
Submitted by messmind (user info) at 2008-12-30 06:39:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
+1 for the poem.+1 for the poster. Add some <3 & Serve hot.Prefferably.
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2008-12-30 06:30:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
haha virgins below
Submitted by rad1101 (user info) at 2008-12-30 06:29:53 EST (#)
Ranking: -1
this was terible
Submitted by NintendoCzar (user info) at 2008-12-30 06:15:18 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Amazing as always.
Submitted by glitterball (user info) at 2008-12-30 03:59:39 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by TheBrad (user info) at 2008-12-30 03:41:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 1
I hated this until the pic of love being washed away. not bad.
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2008-12-30 03:35:33 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Lucky me!! Number One!!
Love this.