A new tune (Still unemployed dammit) (523 hits)
Category: Sound & MusicRating: 1.69 on 15 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by esceptico (View user info) at 2009-02-18 19:35:35 EST
A short story first,
I guess I remember everything about the time we were together. The way you walk inside the apartment that curiously enough seemed to make my day. It was Valentine's the other day and I remember it well because your birthday was near that date, so fuck, I was lying down waiting for the unwanted tequila hangover to come down when I realized you were no longer around not even as a friend or as a contact in my computer when I decided to get up from bed and dress up with that dress I never gave you.
I realized when I was little I dressed up with my dad clothes when he wasn't home and I pretended to be him a while. My mom used to laugh at me, and tell me I looked "so very handsome" Now it's nice to feel your dress caressing my body, the pink and soft blue colors illuminating my face and my hands as I write something in my copybook. It's in a way the closest way to feel you and to be in contact with you. I know you won't hear me again, I know you have a new life better than the one I offered you years ago. I wish someone, anyone would look at me now and tell something, anything like "You look like a fuckin' idiot" or "Let it go, you asshole" but nobody talks to me with such confidence these days.
I hear the door and I think it's probably you. Yeah, it's you after all this time. I can see you right now looking at me like when you arrived from work and told me EVERYTHING about your day. I didn't care then but I so do now. After a coffee you lay beside me in my bed. You're wearing the dress I was wearing and you smile everytime you look at me or at the dress. You like the dress, you get up from bed and look at yourself at the mirror. You smile. I love your smile. We don't have sex anymore, we don't that hippie shit no more. We just talk and hug. We didn't need the world then.
This song is called "When I miss you I dress up with your clothes"
Enjoy
Cuando te extraño me visto con tus ropas.mp3 (11 MB) [audio/x-mpeg]
User Reviews
Submitted by Merlina (user info) at 2009-03-30 11:12:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by RoadSong (user info) at 2009-02-27 15:02:35 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2009-02-27 13:51:15 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I loved this
Submitted by skee (user info) at 2009-02-27 13:39:07 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
sorry about that 0 i meant this
Submitted by skee (user info) at 2009-02-27 13:38:54 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
Sorry F isnt a vowel
but it's what u get
Submitted by skee (user info) at 2009-02-27 13:38:23 EST (#)
Ranking: -2
you get an F
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2009-02-27 13:14:50 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by messmind (user info) at 2009-02-19 12:58:51 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I think the speedup at 2:50 deserves more time and magic silence.
what?
Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2009-02-19 07:43:38 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Listened to it last night just as the power got cut out by the huge friggin storm here. Sounded like Tool. I like Tool, and this was pretty good from what I heard of it.
Submitted by DeathJester (user info) at 2009-02-19 05:59:44 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
I can't help but think the lead guitar is over-distorted... Last time I heard guitar like that was the backing music for Quake II (Which I also thought was awesome). A VERY sharp tempo / timing changes too; I was expecting a bit of a build-up and was taken by surprise.
Either way, i've put it on my Fuze to listen to when walking to the pub. Try putting your stuff on Jamendo; It would save Bart's bandwidth and get you some more market exposure.
Submitted by esceptico (user info) at 2009-02-18 22:49:03 EST (#)
Ranking: 0
These are all new songs. The older ones I sing a lot, but don't sound good overall. Since I do everything people tell me to, the next song I'll upload will be an old one with lyrics, singing and all that crap.
Submitted by YourNameHere (user info) at 2009-02-18 22:05:20 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2009-02-18 20:06:46 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
...in fact, if you sing in Spanish, no one will care what it actually sounds like. So sing it already.
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2009-02-18 19:49:10 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Rob's right, you know.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2009-02-18 19:41:13 EST (#)
Ranking: 2
Tis mighty in its asskickery.
Needs more singing.