You're a little too little, a little too late. (444 hits)
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Submitted by Antioxident (View user info) at 2009-03-19 00:27:18 EDT
4 sections, should be songs. I just got out of a 3 year relationship in the weirdest way possible, but that's a whole other story in itself.
Blind:
Dying hearts laid down to rest,
Drowned in the depths of their own free will
He'll sleep soundly tonight,
But in the morning
The writing on the wall will leave us blind.
The writing on the wall,
Can't change her mind
Will leave us blind.
Overwhelming anxiousness consuming
Tearing through the barrier between
Sadness and loathing
He'll keep on sleeping
But in the morning
He'll die.
In the morning he can't see her eyes
In the morning he'll die
In the morning,
I'll go blind.
The Siren:
I got lost in the siren's eyes
Her weary gaze cast upon shifts set full mast
on their last voyage into the fog
So attractive in the moonlight
her sleek figure set ablaze by hate
lost into the night
I'll never forget you
sunken into the deep blue abyss
I'll never forget the look in your eyes
When the siren burned into the night
Lost:
Those cold words meant nothing
lost in the early haze of the new dawn
I want to awaken but cant.
I wanted to be free but couldn't
Letting on the last whispers of faith,
asleep under the cool lit moon
she mourned
A life once lost
A life once shared
It was never there
Asleep in the new day,
I'll awaken
A new beast to struggle through
a beast to end all worlds
Fading shadow:
Its a matter of life and death
The life of a love
and the death of an era
I'll never be looked upon in the same ways
There is no pride
I have nothing to be proud of
There is no chance for you to forget
I've never needed your cold hands more,
sinking
I'm not to be thought kindly of
I am nothing more
than
a
fading
shadow
User Reviews
Submitted by Mr_Trollope (user info) at 2009-03-23 07:34:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by Judgement (user info) at 2009-03-23 07:27:45 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
No Comment
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2009-03-19 15:51:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2009-03-19 18:59:13 GMT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2009-03-19 07:03:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Poetry is toss for the most part.
I would be mildly interested in reading a short, non-poetic non-emo description of what you consider "the weirdest way possible" to get out of a three year relationship.
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shitting on his eggs benedict.
Submitted by Fey (user info) at 2009-03-19 14:59:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2009-03-19 07:03:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Poetry is toss for the most part.
I would be mildly interested in reading a short, non-poetic non-emo description of what you consider "the weirdest way possible" to get out of a three year relationship.
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2009-03-19 12:36:33 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
No Comment
Submitted by Antioxident (user info) at 2009-03-19 08:39:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Hah. Yeah, its not an emo description what so ever. I'm compiling it as I type this.
And yes, Its good to be back. Missed this place.
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2009-03-19 07:03:25 EDT (#)
Ranking: -1
Poetry is toss for the most part.
I would be mildly interested in reading a short, non-poetic non-emo description of what you consider "the weirdest way possible" to get out of a three year relationship.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2009-03-19 05:45:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i read this last night, you are the emo kid with the floppy fringe.
good to see you back, i liked this.
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2009-03-19 04:57:38 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
You're a little too little, a little too boring
Submitted by dangerdude (user info) at 2009-03-19 02:18:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
poetry auto-2
Submitted by RoadSong (user info) at 2009-03-19 02:05:57 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
"So attractive in the moonlight
her sleek figure set ablaze by hate"
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2009-03-19 01:01:14 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Didn't read it.
I just hope this rating pisses in some dork's cornflakes.
Submitted by melkorthedelerious (user info) at 2009-03-19 00:59:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
here you go.
Submitted by Antioxident (user info) at 2009-03-19 00:43:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Hell yes! Lovin' it.
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2009-03-19 00:40:56 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Thanks for the permission to choose my own rating, fucktard.
Submitted by Antioxident (user info) at 2009-03-19 00:27:55 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Feel free to -2 this I haven't posted in nearly a year.