UGR Soul Shake Down Party (405 hits)
Category: RomanceRating: 1.77 on 19 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by SkullBiter (View user info) at 2009-03-26 13:47:33 EDT
I'm restless by nature. Thats just how we are, everyday I wait. I wait until I can be free from the sack of meat I'm attached too. Then when the blessed time comes, and their eyes flutter, sputter and finally close, I'm out. Free. Free to do what I want I suppose. I'm off to the party in the sky, a place that exists to not exist. I've been on fantastic adventures. I've seen women I do not know naked, I've flown, fought and fled. Everyones dreams are intertwined, as the other people in the dreams are actually other souls too. We enter and exit with no regard as the things we do, and the things we see are not of our choosing. We are at the whim of our meat sacks mind.
Tonight I'm walking along an alley way. A twisted subconscious has me being chased. I know that I am afraid, so very, very afraid. The terror that rips through my body peaks as I turn around a corner, into a corner. I'm trapped, my body shudders.
"Freeze mother fucker."
The voice chills me to the bone, this is not the voice of another soul, but yet the malignant voice of the very devil himself. The scourge of souls, the sultan of soul stealing, the selfish suck fuck of soul reaping.
I spin around to face him, and I know its too late. I've come to the end of the line, the devils got his sights set on me, and he's throwing a soul shake down party.
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Submitted by abdansner (user info) at 2009-03-27 14:18:24 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by YourNameHere (user info) at 2009-03-26 21:51:20 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by gonefiguring (user info) at 2009-03-26 20:32:15 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Jammin'.
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2009-03-26 18:18:34 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by Lib (user info) at 2009-03-26 16:52:10 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by RoadSong (user info) at 2009-03-26 16:50:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
"I've come to the end of the line, the devils got his sights set on me, and he's throwing a soul shake down party."
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2009-03-26 16:30:02 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
you rock
Submitted by Bubba2341 (user info) at 2009-03-26 16:07:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
"Shake it down, shake it down now."
Submitted by haikumikoo (user info) at 2009-03-26 15:31:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
No Comment
Submitted by SkullBiter (user info) at 2009-03-26 15:08:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
Several things did cross my mind, that song, and jazz.
I wanted to go less obvious.
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2009-03-26 15:05:52 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
It was either shear force of will or complete ignorance, but somehow you used that title without mentioning the Bob Marley tune.
Submitted by HellRazer (user info) at 2009-03-26 14:30:51 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
good writing. Nice use of imagery. That being said, I just didn't care for it.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2009-03-26 14:28:21 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 me name in the story.
Submitted by inion_de_trua (user info) at 2009-03-26 14:25:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
i will probably lose this. or forfeit. or forget again...
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2009-03-26 14:23:35 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by monkeyswithguns (user info) at 2009-03-26 14:21:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
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Submitted by FALLEN (user info) at 2009-03-26 14:08:53 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
poor soul
Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2009-03-26 13:57:50 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
+2 soul mugging.
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2009-03-26 13:50:06 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
1.5ish but I'll round up on account that I will skullFUCKNOTBITE you!