this isnt for you. (567 hits)
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Submitted by sketch9 (View user info) at 2009-03-29 05:13:08 EDT
Forsake.
There is rain.
wrecking balls work feverishly
to bring down walls.
there is a name for this feeling:
it is Hurt.
and were I to describe the feeling,
I'd call it, color it after her as
she escaped herself, and
then woke to find she
had been followed.
and she...
she is sheathed in sheets of glass
like a castle, or closet,
within which she can't breathe,
and she looks out at you
she looks out at me
knowing now that
what we had was only
the heat of hands touching
on opposite sides of the pane.
forsake forsake forsake forsake
was it all a mistake? I asked shaking.
I hadn't yet taken my hand away,
Troubletouch,
and will I be
dried out, will I
become dust and sand?
as if
my hand, and its
contact with the glass that
I trusted was your skin, your prints,
split the length of my lifeline,
spilled rivulets of blood
down my palm, around
my wrist to fall
and kiss the ground?
and there—
will something someday grow?
ahhh fuck it, you sleep
closed in the corners,
I wipe snot from your face,
and always you're blue smoke,
you you you you whisper
you say,
"Do ya love me? Do ya love me?
Do ya love me? Do you,
do you love?"
no one has love enough
to give you, so that
you could love yourself.
but I could've died at the effort
because I died at your eyes.
and you're just a sad child,
but that surprised me. you
must have been a mother
some other birth.
and I suffered yeah i suffered yeah i suffered for you
paint the bridge with
bitch winds till it
gives way into the bay, and
I will ferry you across...
what I won't do is,
I won't carry you to bed.
never lay like spoons again.
won't ever forget the words you said
to me, now uttered in drawn rooms
to new lovers with
the same emphasis.
I'll soon wash our hours
from the blankets.
Kay,
I called you Kay,
behold! The poet
no longer holds you,
I told you that the day
came in on your shoulders.
I don't feel that way
anymore.
I am a soldier for the True,
you couldn't change that
had you wanted to!
And I will sling
arrows of fire
at the shadows of liars
to watch the whole world
taken ablaze.
are you proud to say
you burn on without me?
- ZJ
User Reviews
Submitted by sketch9 (user info) at 2009-04-02 00:49:16 EDT (#)
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y'all nigga's been trolled.
Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2009-04-01 23:27:07 EDT (#)
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your retals are shit. if you were actually just posting it here for the link then you wouldn't care about our saaad, pathetic little ratings and saad, pathetic little opinions
Submitted by experima (user info) at 2009-04-01 22:23:05 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
No Comment
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2009-04-01 21:56:38 EDT (#)
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Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2009-04-01 21:12:51 EDT (#)
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haha, retal ratings are awesome!
Submitted by Shlongy (user info) at 2009-04-01 21:21:57 EDT (#)
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Thankfully...
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2009-04-01 21:12:51 EDT (#)
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haha, retal ratings are awesome!
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2009-04-01 21:09:10 EDT (#)
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Nice retal ratings, champ. I thought you didn't come here any more? Didn't you say that below? Yet here you are.
Submitted by Snark (user info) at 2009-03-30 13:41:35 EDT (#)
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I WANNA BE UPPITY TO!
Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2009-03-30 13:33:18 EDT (#)
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Darth Coffee maker is gonna fuck you up.
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2009-03-30 13:25:07 EDT (#)
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THIS -2 IS IN HOPES YOU'LL CALL ME UPPITY OR SOMETHING.
Submitted by Brdn_Nkd (user info) at 2009-03-30 11:00:17 EDT (#)
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you're right.
Submitted by sicosemen (user info) at 2009-03-30 10:56:31 EDT (#)
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If not for me, then who mother fucker?
Submitted by i_can_get_you_a_toe (user info) at 2009-03-30 03:39:16 EDT (#)
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A piece of snot would be more interesting than this.
Submitted by sketch9 (user info) at 2009-03-30 01:36:30 EDT (#)
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its not a website. not a message board. there isnt a centralized place to post things. get over yourself, you're obviously not smarter than me.
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2009-03-30 01:32:52 EDT (#)
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This was.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2009-03-30 00:07:24 EDT (#)
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Uppity? Don't flatter yourself. No one here cares about you or your interweb alternatives. I'm sure an 'online community' that forces you to go to another site to share something is 'vastly more entertaining.' I bet once they figure out how to allow you to submit material and master copy/paste there will be no stopping them!
Submitted by sketch9 (user info) at 2009-03-30 00:01:21 EDT (#)
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and before you ubertards get more uppity, the community i was sharing it with wasnt ubersite. nay, something larger and vastly more entertaining.
Submitted by sketch9 (user info) at 2009-03-29 23:57:26 EDT (#)
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Your browser doesn't have bookmarks? Your computer doesn't have a C drive?
If you post something that isn't yours and you don't credit the source, it's called plagiarism, whether it's on ubersite or not.
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yeah, my browser has bookmarks, but i was sharing this with an online community, not just myself.
and i did credit the source, his initials are at the bottom of the poem. you seem to be some sort of idiot.
Submitted by Sacrilicious (user info) at 2009-03-29 23:48:20 EDT (#)
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Submitted by sketch9 (user info) at 2009-03-29 21:14:29 EDT (#)
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i didnt write this, and i didnt put it on here to be reviewed. i dont really care what you tards think of this, i only consider this site as a useful little chunk of database where i can post things that i can send a link for.
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Your browser doesn't have bookmarks? Your computer doesn't have a C drive?
If you post something that isn't yours and you don't credit the source, it's called plagiarism, whether it's on ubersite or not.
Submitted by sketch9 (user info) at 2009-03-29 21:14:29 EDT (#)
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i didnt write this, and i didnt put it on here to be reviewed. i dont really care what you tards think of this, i only consider this site as a useful little chunk of database where i can post things that i can send a link for.
that being said, that poem isnt my feelings. its not about me, its not about my life. it is however, very good writing. this site used to be about writing. now its about retarded things, which is why i dont come here anymore. so bask in the light of your sad little lives until you realize that ubersite sucks worse than ebaumsworld.
Submitted by kaos-king (user info) at 2009-03-29 17:33:05 EDT (#)
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Eh, everyone hates poetry on this site...
... that said, it was only 'okay.'
Submitted by shitfuck (user info) at 2009-03-29 11:16:25 EDT (#)
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Not bad, but a little boring.
Submitted by RoadSong (user info) at 2009-03-29 10:20:31 EDT (#)
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"paint the bridge with
bitch winds till it
gives way into the bay, and
I will ferry you across..."
Submitted by RoadSong (user info) at 2009-03-29 10:20:17 EDT (#)
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"paint the bridge with
bitch winds till it
gives way into the bay, and
I will ferry you across..."
Submitted by GodChicken (user info) at 2009-03-29 07:10:20 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by TLawrence (user info) at 2009-03-29 05:48:27 EDT (#)
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No Comment
Submitted by Phallic_Cymbals (user info) at 2009-03-29 05:20:26 EDT (#)
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Life is hard...
Lol u stoopid faget
Submitted by Ballare (user info) at 2009-03-29 05:18:00 EDT (#)
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this isn't for you, either