You descend and then repeat (328 hits)
Category: Quotes & Stories -> PoetryRating: -0.26 on 14 reviews (Rate this item) (V)
Submitted by <keklund.at.live.ca> (View user info) at 2009-05-19 01:23:39 EDT
You descend and then repeat
Looking at the punctures in the ceiling
You descend and then repeat
The words that made you think
What else is there to be?
Besides being alive and breathing
You descend as the tears float higher
How you'll fall, how the world will be
It's Empty
When you descend my memories will slowly fade
When you descend I'll never be the same
Here's a little back story if you didn't get this poem, no offense you probably didn't. It's refering to my grandfather at the time I wrote this he had terminal cancer, in my head I kept see him die over and over again. He died in january. (punctures in the ceiling, I was staring at my ceiling you know, like the ones in classrooms with the holes)
hope you kinda enjoyed it.
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Submitted by apollo88 (user info) at 2009-05-20 14:28:49 EDT (#)
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i did not kinda enjoy it.
Submitted by RoadSong (user info) at 2009-05-19 23:58:20 EDT (#)
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"Here's a little back story if you didn't get this poem, no offense you probably didn't. It's refering to my grandfather at the time I wrote this he had terminal cancer, in my head I kept see him die over and over again. He died in january. (punctures in the ceiling, I was staring at my ceiling you know, like the ones in classrooms with the holes)"
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Sorry to hear of your loss.
Interesting way you connected the ceiling punctures.
Submitted by SgtHartman (user info) at 2009-05-19 13:52:51 EDT (#)
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Submitted by TuTs (user info) at 2009-05-19 08:27:32 EDT (#)
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The world is empty, Woe is me. CUT CUT CUT.
The darkness shines its nothingness in mine eyes. CUT CUT CUT.
If there were no stars the sky, oh the sky would be perfect to me. CUT CUT CUT.
My blood it oozes down my leg like pee. CUT CUT CUT.
Oh life is hard for an emo like me. CUT CUT CUT.
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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Submitted by scourge (user info) at 2009-05-19 13:49:11 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
oh look, someone else to hate. sweet.
Submitted by TuTs (user info) at 2009-05-19 08:27:32 EDT (#)
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The world is empty, Woe is me. CUT CUT CUT.
The darkness shines its nothingness in mine eyes. CUT CUT CUT.
If there were no stars the sky, oh the sky would be perfect to me. CUT CUT CUT.
My blood it oozes down my leg like pee. CUT CUT CUT.
Oh life is hard for an emo like me. CUT CUT CUT.
Submitted by Toddler (user info) at 2009-05-19 06:42:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
WHAT THE FAG
Submitted by EmissionImpossible (user info) at 2009-05-19 06:11:47 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
alter alert
Submitted by skrapmetal (user info) at 2009-05-19 06:10:41 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Redskies is right, you know.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2009-05-19 04:20:37 EDT (#)
Ranking: 0
ROB! FJ! Really, you pussys
Submitted by rob_berg (user info) at 2009-05-19 04:18:13 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2009-05-19 03:39:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Look dude this was pretty lame
>BUT<
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2009-05-19 04:13:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
My condolences.
Submitted by F.J.Bell (user info) at 2009-05-19 04:13:12 EDT (#)
Ranking: 2
My condolences.
Submitted by orphelia (user info) at 2009-05-19 03:39:00 EDT (#)
Ranking: 1
Look dude this was pretty lame but I ain't going rain on your emo parade and +1 for trying.
Uber doesn't do poetry, you are in for a rough ride.
If you are a self harmer, and I feel that may be a good possibility, please phone someone responsible to come over and hide all sharp objects and your Evanesence CD's away from you.
Big love <3
Submitted by frankthebear (user info) at 2009-05-19 02:21:26 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
poetry auto -2
Submitted by redskieslookfake (user info) at 2009-05-19 01:48:48 EDT (#)
Ranking: -2
Dreadful. You probably don't understand what that means. No offense.